Nightmare

In my many failed attempts at writing fanfics, I decided I should not give up. This is my first real fanfic.

Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Ok, here goes nothing.

"Wake up, Brennan!!, Brennan!" Shalimar screamed. "Brennan Please!"

There was now use, she knew they were in trouble, big trouble.

If only she could get to him, maybe she would be able to help him. Maybe she could stop his life from draining. Her wrists were torn from trying to break free of the chains that held her to the walls. He was laying on the ground, bleeding from an unnatural hole in his stomach . They knew, they knew that he didn't have much fight in him, so they left him on the ground to die.

If only she could get to him, stop the bleeding, she knew he would have more time. If only he would wake up and stop the bleeding himself. If only.. If only they didn't take this mission.

She knew it was a trap, she could feel it, but she stupidly thought that they could handle it. Know it was Brennan who was paying for it.

She sank to the ground sobbing. She could only sit there and replay the events that led to this one moment in time, where she might lose the one man she loves and he would never know.

It started out as a normal day, but quickly turned into a nightmare.

How is it? R & R Please!