By all means, i appricate any feedback, but you made your 'feedback' sound A LOT like hate. you could have chosen your wording differently you know, if you don't like my stories, simply don't read them. I'm sorry that i know nothing about acual love. But note that this story was just a thing i made like a year ago during the summer holidays when i was bored, I never thought i'd get even a little bit of popularity, but yet, it still got quite popular, and you cannot imagine how happy i am about that. What im saying to you is just that if you don't like my stories, don't read them. I am okay with negitve feedback, as long as that is all it is. Feedback. Not hate.

Also, why not try writing your own stories instead of hating on a young teenage girl?

*Creepy fake smile*