Hello everyone this is my first fanfic but let's get things straight before you read the story: (1 Paring will be Naruto / Yugito NO OBJECTION and some other paring. (2 Naruto and Yugito will be the same age along with Samui, Omoi and Karui. (3 I would like to say sorry but Killer Bee will not be rapping because I have absolutely no idea how to rap at all. (4 There will also be Konoha bashing except for some character will not be bashed. (5 there will be OC . pleas enjoy.

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto.

Spiral Storm of Kumo

Chapter 1 Goodbye Konoha and Hello Kumo

Forest outside Konoha No Sato

During a rainy night at the outskirts forest of Konoha No Sato a small young boy by the name of Naruto Uzumaki, about 6 years old, with blond spikey hair, electric blue eyes and three whisker marks on each cheek while wearing his shirt with a few cut here and there with some blood stain on it and wearing a cloak. He Manage to narrowly escape from an angry mob that was chasing after him for being the so call 'demon brat' or 'Kyuubi' himself. "Stupid ass villagers can't even tell between a kunai and a scroll." Naruto said 'Kurama are you sure about this what if they don't accept me there.' the boy asks his tenant.

"Kit we don't know if we don't try," came a demonic voice answering the boy "And beside with your heritage and a few of the scroll we ransack from your parents place not to mention adding me in the mix the Raikage will no doubt have a heart attack."kyuubi chuckle at the last part. The young boy could not help but break a smile at kyuubi joke about the Raikage when he got his answer and continue to walk but stops when he saw a light in front of him. With the training that he got form Kyuubi the standard ninja basic training including his very famous stealth he goes closer to the light while hidden in a bush and was shock to see three shinobi wearing a white vest standard to all Kumo shinobi. Kyuubi was blinking a couple of time and finally spoke "Kit I don't know if Kami finally answering your prayers or it's just your blind luck that you found three kumo shinobi sitting right in front of us right now and guess what one of them is also like you." Naruto try to answer 'y-y-you mean one of them is a Jin jin.' "Yes a Jinchūriki is among them and it's the Hachibi or Gyuki himself." Kyuubi cut him off Naruto continue to observer and hear there conversation.

The Kumo shinobi that Naruto is spying on are C a normal white skin and blond hair shinobi very common in kumo and one of the Raikage best friends. He wore a black shirt and the white jounin vest he also wore black pants with some bandage wrap around his legs. He also wore hand grads on both arms.

The other shinobi is Darui a tall and dark skinned man with white hair with some muscles. He also have some tattoo with the kanji of 'Water' on his left hand and to his right the kanji of 'Lightning' and have a big sword strap to his back. He wore the same colour cloths as C, he also wore bandage wrapped around his arms and also the Raikage right hand man.

The last one is Killer Bee the brother of the Raikage and Jinchūriki of the Hachibi. Like Darui he also have dark skin but with lighter blond hair. He wears black sunglasses and the standard jounin vest only with a long white scarf around his neck. Bee also have tattoo of bull horns on his left cheek and the kanji 'steel' on his right arm and wore white fingerless glove with three red lining and circles on each glove. He has seven white swords with red hilt strap on his back.

While Bee is chewing on some food and listening to his comrade's jocks and laughter his tenant the Hachibi or Gyuki senses a presence behind them. Gyuki spoke "Oi Bee I can sense demonic chakra near us but I can't tell whose it belong too." bee spoke 'Yo you sure about that Gyuki.' Gyuki answer "positive and whoever he or she is they are very close." cutting the connection to Killer Bee.

"Yo guys mind lowering it down a little" Bee asks C and Darui quiet down a little and both of them look at Bee curiously C ask "What up Bee are we being surrounded." Darui grip his sword ready for anything Bee signal his team to stand down "We're being watch" Bee said "Come out whoever you are I know you're out there." Naruto curse himself 'Shit I've been found out' "Kit reveal yourself if anything happens summon me." Like the Kyuubi said Naruto mentally nodded and show himself to the three Kumo shinobi.

Darui raised an eyebrow and spoke "Seems like things won't get so dull after all but what's a kid doing out here all by himself and look like his been to hell and came back." Naruto ignore Darui comment and stare at Killer Bee and spoke "So Gyuki told you where I was." Bee nodded and raises a fist and said "Yo kid the name is Killer BeeJinchūriki of the Hachibi no Kyogyu and you must hold one of Hachibi friend?" At this point C and Darui eye widen when he said hold one of his tenant friends.

Naruto nodded and responded like Killer Bee he raised a fist and introduce himself "I'm Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze and the Jinchūriki of the Kyuubi no kitsune and before anything else yes my dad is the Yellow Flash and the Konoha Yondaime Hokage Minato Namikaze and my mom is the red whirlpool of death Kushina Uzumaki." The three man eyes widen like their eye was about to pop out. The kid standing in front of them is the son of the legendary Yellow Flash and Red Whirlpool of death; he should had been treated like royalty but is still shunned and beaten by the entire village except for some very few people who are a self-proclaim Super Pervert, a ramen chef and his daughter and two Anbu shinobi Inu and Neko treated him like a human being and hero "I know this is going to sound crazy but can I follow you back to your village and be a Kumo nin." The three was surprise but yet again having a third Jinchūriki would not be half bad but all three Kumo shinobi thought the same thing 'The Raikage/Bro is going to have a heart attack after he hear who the kid Is.' Kyuubi sneeze and thought "Someone is thinking the same thing." While in Kumo a man with huge muscles also sneezes 'someone is talking about me.'

The three look at each other and nodded Bee spoke "Sure thing Naruto but first why don't you come here warm up and have some food with us." "Okay" was all Naruto said and did what Bee said. Bee spoke again "Oh right Naruto let me introduce you to my teammate C and Darui" Both man respond "Hi/Yo" Naruto greeted theme as well and took a seat next to Bee have some and went to sleep because they will be leaving in the morning.

In the morning Naruto took a change of cloth from the bag after that all three shinobi and Naruto speed up to the land of lightning

Kumogakure No Sato

All four individual manage to reach Kumogakure in the afternoon naruto was astonish on how kumo look like. In the middle of the village is the Raikage tower is the largest building throughout the village.

As Naruto and co walk through the streets of Kumo Naruto notice a mob surrounding near the ally way and he decided to investigate the three shinobi also notice it and follow the blond. Our blond and co walk through the angry mob and notice a girl with a long blond hair tied to a braid wearing a blue t-shirt with black pants that only reach half a leg was about to be beaten by a fat villager with a wooden stick. Before Bee could step in our young hero jump in with a blue sphere forming on his right hand a jutsu that Bee knows too well, in Bee head 'Holy crap is that the.' and was cut off by Naruto yelling "RASENGAN!" Naruto hit the man with the blue sphere sending flying back to a wall but not killing the man.

Before the Angry mob could do anything a yelling voice came from behind the crowd "WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON AOUND HERE" The man has dark skinned along with huge muscles and wearing white robes, black pants, gold belt buckle and huge weights covering his forearm. His hair colour is also similar to Bee and his hair is pulls back he also have bearded and moustache. "Well is anyone is going to answer me" he is Ē or everyone knows him as the Yondaime Raikage of Kumogakure No Sato.

"Yo Bro the that fat guy over there" bee pointed at the unconscious villager "Was about beat the living hell out of little Yugito-chan here but luckily young Naruto saved her" Ē spoke and glare at the mob "Is that so Volt." he snap his fingers two Kumo anbu or volt came out of the shadow one was a mask of Tora and Ookami "Take the useless peace of filth to I&T and tell Dodai no holding back" they nodded and body flicker away with the manat the last word the entire angry mob paled and break away leaving the Raikage and co behind "And you" the Raikage glaring at Naruto "Thank you for saving Yugito but I never see you in the village before."

Bee spoke "Bro we can explain that but not here let's take this to your office." Ē looks at Bee curiously but nodded they look back at Naruto who offered a hand to Yugito "Thank you for saving me no one else but the Raikage, his brother, C and Darui only help me." Naruto response "No problem my Nee-chan always told me to be a gentlemen around girls." She blush a little as naruto looks into her other eyes he thought 'Wow she has beautiful slits eyes.' but Kyuubi spoke up "Aww look like my kit got his first crush, oh they growing up so fast." Wiping away fake tears 'sh sh- shut up.' Naruto blush many shade of red.

Meanwhile in Yugito mind 'Wow he looks so cute with those whisker marks on his cheeks I want to hug him like a teddy bear 'while a demonic voice a rise "Instead of hugging the boy Kitten why don't you take him to your place and ride his." 'MATA I AM ARE NOT DOING THAT WE'ER BARELY SIX FOR KAMI SAKE!' Nibi pouted "Spoiled sport."While Yugito blush furiously Bee decided speak up "As much as I like to use this for blackmail its best if we get going to the tower and Yugito you follow too this is something you want to know about your hero." Knocking them out from their trance and made their way to the Raikage Tower.

Raikage Tower

At the Raikage tower they were greeted by Mabui the Raikage assistant as they enter the office the raikage took his seat "Okay first business is the mission complete?" Bee reply "Yup bro mission to take out two bandit camp is a mission accomplish" Ē nodded "Good now on to the second who is the kid and why he reminds me of someone but I can't put my finger on it." Ē rubs his chin but Bee decided to prepared a camera while Darui spoke up "Well Boss why don't we let the kid introduce himself" Ē nodded again

"It's an honour to meet you Raikage-sama" Naruto bowed and spoke "My name is Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze I 'was' from konoha and I'm the Jinchūriki of the Kyuubi no kitsune and yes my dad is the Yellow Flash and Konoha Yondaime Hokage Minato Namikaze and my mom is the red whirlpool of death Kushina Uzumaki." At the end of his introduction few things happen the Raikage yelled "WHAT" before he fainted, Bee grinning like a mad man and took a photo, Yugito eyes were wide the size of dinner plates, Matatabi was screaming in her container mind "ITS KYUU-KUN!, KITTEN I DON'T CARE YOU'RE GOING TO RIDE THE BOY ALL NIGHT TILL YOU CAN'T WALK STRIGHT YOU HEAR ME YOU-" the connection was cut off, while C and Darui were on the floor laughing their ass off.

A few minutes later Ē woke up "I could have sworn I heard you said your name was Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze." Naruto nodded and the Raikage want down for the second time in his mind 'I think I may have found my successor' and woke up again and sat on his Bee spoke "Bro before you pass out again here Naruto would like to join kumo ranks" Ē nodded

"Firstly my Name is Ē Raikage of Kumogakure No Sato and thet idiot over their as you know is Killer Bee is the Jinchūriki of the Hachibi no Kyogyu and the girl that you save next to you is my adoptive daughter Yugito Nii the Jinchūriki of the Nibi Bakeneko" Naruto jaw drop to the ground when he found out the girl he save is just like him "but why would you like to be a Kumo shinobi why not your home?" Ē ask curiously while mabui enter to give the next set of paper to be sign Ē invited her to listen in

"We all do respect Raikage-sama a home that hates you is not your home."Naruto took a deep breath close his eyes for a moment and told his story "When I was still in the orphanages they kept me in a basement they only feeding me once every week but i try to survive by eating some bugs I could find and when I was 4 I was kicked out from the orphanage and was force to live on the streets for 6 month while eating garbage" That made everyone in the room shade a tear Yugito and Mabui start to cry the story also made the strongest and fastest man alive shade a tear as well "every time I walk out in the open people will become an angry mob and attack me in the broad day light the hokage made me stay at a rat hole he calls an apartment in the red light district then on my birthday people will kidnap me and hunt me like an animal calling it a 'Great Fox Hunt' or 'The Hunt'." At this point Ē raised a hand signalling Naruto to stop his story.

"Naruto when you spoke I can tell your speak the truth and if you want to be a shinobi of Kumo you have to join the academy and the same goes for you Yugito if you want to be a kunoichi you have to do the same are we clear" both nodded Ē spoke "good the both of you will report to academy next week and as for leaving arrangement you will be staying next to Yugito apartment" both nodded again "Well seeing its already 2 o'clock your all dismiss " everyone except Bee left decided to speak "Yo Bro so when can I start to train them with their bijuu." knowing his brother was going to talk about the bijuu, Ē sigh and told him "When they turn 9 then you can start but I'll train the boy as well and I can sense that Naruto will go farther than any of us can go there is no doubt about it your dismissed." Bee smirked before leaving "Oh and one more thing bro when Mr Nine save little Miss Two he used the Rasengan." Ē jaw dropped on the ground and eyes wider than his desk upon hearing this, Bee took a photo of the speechless Ē and leaving while laughing like an Idiot. Ē returns to normal and though 'He will no doubt go far then his parents or any of us' smile continuing his work.

C and Darui left Naruto to yugito "um Naruto what would you like to do first" Naruto thought for a moment but his stomach answer for him he smile sheepishly "Well that answer your question." Yugito giggled "Why don't go and have something to eat haw about ramen" nobody have to tell Naruto twice about ramen he nodded and follow Yugito.

Yugito stop at a shop called Azuma's Own by Minami and son her son Kio like the ichirakus but opposites owner. "Minami-san I brought you a new customer," a lady with green hair came out from the kitchen "Oh my Yugito-chan who is this young man are you on a date" Yugito blush "N-n-no this is Naruto his new in the village," stuttering on her while the own word handing them menus "Yugito-chan I'm Just teasing, what would it be for today," Yugito orderd "the usual Manami-san" the waiter/Chef nodded knowing her usual is 3 fish ramen and 2 shrimp ramen she look at naruto. But Naruto is a new customer he don't know what is good he but order 7 bowls of different flavour ramen Manami jaw dropped and nodded

Few minuets a boy in his early teen dark blue hair he is Kio, Manami son came out with their bowl of ramen and they started eating "So this is the kid that eats more then you and Bee-sama and a surplus the boy who save you," Yugito stop for a moment and raise an eyebrow "how do you know Kio-niisan" he replied "Oh I was there and was about to help you but the kid beat me to it, punching that guy sending him flying now that awesome," leaving the future couple.

After eating Yugito gave Naruto a tour around Kumo but there was one thing Naruto notice the hateful glare that the villagers kept sending Yugito they were about to form a mob and attack Yugito. But Naruto active his bijuu cloak his eyes have slitsand turn crimson red and yell at the mob "YOU FUCKING IDIOTS DOSE ANYONE HERE THINK FOR A MOMENT THAT KILLING YUGITO YOU'LL BE RELASING THE NIBI," some of the villagers looked down thinking of what he said is true but if she dies they die "Try and put yourself in our shoes and feel the pain, the sadness, the loneliness and the endless suffering we have to go through because some idiots can't tell a difference between a scroll and a kunai ," when the mob decided to reflect on what they have done, Naruto cloak died down and continue the tour.

Naruto and Yugito Apartmen Complex

After the tour Naruto and Yugitio had dinner ant went to their apartment complex before entering their room Yugito spoke "Naruto," Naruto look at her "Yes Yu-" but before he could finish saying anything else Yugito kiss him on the cheek "Thank you for saving me twice," before she ran in to her room leaving a dumbstruck Naruto.

In Yugito room a blue two tailed cat was happy "Alright Kitten you got your mate now all you have to do is drag him to your room tie him up and -" 'Nibi how many times I must tell you I am not doing that.' "Kitten PLEEAAASSSEE I want my time with my Kyuu-kun I want to ride his p-" Yugito cut the connection took to a shower and went to sleep but Nibi have her revenge on Yugito by putting images of a certain blond spikey hair boy in her dreams.

Meanwhile Naruto have the same thing happening with Kyuubi "So Kit when are, you going to make a move," 'Sh-sh-shut up beside were to young,' "But still I'm going to have to give you The Talk very soon knowing Nibi she'll rape you when you're older," Cutting the connection Naruto took a shower and went to bed. While Kyuubi did the same as Nibi sending Naruto images of a certain long hair blond girl.