Hey! How you doing? Good. That's nice.
So here is the new story I'm writing. If it sucks tell me how to improve, but please be nice! BTW this will use all the same charters in His Sister, so that also includes Olivia. She will also be his sis in his story too.
Enjoy
Tris POV
BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP
What's that sound it's really annoying. Oh it's my alarm. I slam down on it to make it shut up and get out of bed rubbing sleep from my eyes. I make my way to the bathroom and get in the shower, letting the warm water wake me up. Once I'm all clean I wrap myself in a fluffy towel and make my way into my walk-in closet. If I haven't mentioned the fact that my family is very rich. My dad is a world renowned architect and engineer and my mom partially owns Chanel from some crazy business deal with my uncle. They also do international charity work and they are always gone off. I always miss them.
Once I am all dressed in a gray tee with a tribal print owl on it, paired with some pink jeans and a pair of black sandals, topped off with a messy top knot and a couple rings. I look at the clock and it says 7:30. I have a little time so I put on al little bit of eyeliner and some tinted lip balm. I rush down the stairs to find my brother, Caleb sitting at the breakfast bar reading yet another book.
"Hey book worm" I rustle his hair and he ignores me. I roll my eyes and grab a pop tart out of the pantry and devour it. I check the time and I realize I have ten minutes to get to school.
"Caleb come on we got to go" I yell. I grab my backpack and rush to my car. I hop into my Lexus IS 350 F Sport and speed off to school.
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Once I have parked I hop out of my car and make my way over to Christina who looks like she just won the lottery.
"Hey Chris" I say casually.
"Hey Tris" Christina squeals.
"Why are you so happy" I ask her. Christina takes a deep breath and practically screams "WILL ASKED ME OUT!". I just smile because I know she has had a crush on him since last year. I knew Will kinda liked her but I wasn't sure, until now at least.
"Christina a little bit louder, they didn't hear you in China" I sneer sarcastically.
"Sorry I'm just so happy and excited, Will is so cute with his green eyes and blonde hair and he's so-"Christina rambles before I cut her off again, "That's good and all, but I would like to go see the rest of our friends"
Christina nods and we walk over to the rest of our friends located by Uriah's car.
"Hey Tris there's supposed to be some new students I heard the guy is really cute, you just might get a boyfriend" Christina elbows me and wiggles her eyebrows. I roll my eyes and ignore her. No guy would date me. I'm still too short even though I have filled out I still am only 5'2 ½", my nose is too long, and my eyes are a dull blue-grey color.
When we get there Will is talking to Uriah and Lynn is playing slide with Marlene.
"ihola" Uriah says with a Mexican accent that makes me giggle.
"Where is Zeke and Shauna" I ask looking around for them.
"Probably off somewhere with his tongue down Shauna's throat" Christina rolls her eyes. She is probably right they are always off somewhere talking, making out…etc etc. Uriah pulls out his phone and called Zeke, he answered on the fifth ring.
Phone conversation:
What! - Zeke
Is that any way to talk to your brother on the first day of school- Uriah
What do you want Uri- Zeke
For you and Shauna to get your tongues from out each other's throats, get off your lazy butts and come on and say hi"- Uriah
We'll be there-Zeke
(End)
We all sit around and catch up on things until Zeke arrives.
"Hey guys" Zeke says as he approaches us. Before we could answer two really nice cars zoom by making everyone turn their heads. One of the cars is a Camaro ZL1 and the other is a Lexus LFA. We all watch as they zoom expertly into a parking space. A boy and girl emerge from each of the cars. The girl has olive skin, black hair up in a pony tail and expertly applied makeup, she also seem to be about an inch taller than me. The boy is very handsome he has very dark hair, light olive skin, they both have a full bottom lip but the girl has a full top lip too, and I can see all the girls staring at him and glaring at the girl, they must be dating. They both are looking at some papers and the girl looks up and sees us and she pull the guy along with her. I see the guy's eyes land on mine and stay for a quick moment. Wow he is hot. No Tris he would never date you, besides the girl next to him is most likely his girlfriend.
"Excuse me, but can you show us to Mrs. Matthews' class please" the girl asks sweetly. We all look around at each other as if to say 'you cool with it'.
"Sure" Christina speaks up in a friendly tone "what's your name"
"I'm Olivia and this is Four" Olivia extends a hand to Christina and Christina shakes it. Huh Four different name, it's got to be a nickname. The bell rings for first period so all ten of us file into school. We show Olivia and Four to the 11th grade hallway. We show them to their lockers and it turns out I have a locker next to Four, which excites me for some reason, and Christina's is three lockers down. Olivia's is next to Zeke's and Marlene, Lynn, Shauna, and Will have lockers down the hall. Once we have our lockers set up we divide up and head to first period. I have it with Christina, Olivia, and Four.
We arrive in class and there are only a few people there so we take a seat towards the back. We all just sit in silence until Zeke and Shauna come in arguing over something. I don't get them sometimes, they are either making out or arguing.
"Hey hey hey what's wrong" I ask them.
"This genius over here had us on the 9th grade hall looking for this class" Shauna crossed her arms.
"I'm sorry I thought they had a 9th grade Mrs. Matthews" Zeke said throwing his hands up dramatically.
"Why would they give juniors a class on the 9th grade hall?" Shauna says like it's the most obvious thing in the world. Zeke shrugs.
"Zeke I wonder about you" Shauna says plopping down in a seat. Zeke sat in one next her and whispered things in her ear that made her laugh. See one minute they are arguing the next they are all lovey dovey. I will never understand love. Once everyone has filed into class the teacher takes roll and I can feel a burning stare on the side of my face. I glance over to see Four staring at me out of the corner of his eye. Our eyes met and I blush. I turn away before I turn even redder.
Four POV
As soon as me and my sister Olivia park we get out. I take in the so called Allegiant High and it's big and looks like it had been nicely remodeled. When we do I see every girl staring at me longingly. I sigh internally I don't want all these girls throwing themselves at me all year.
"What classes do you have" Olivia asks me. I pull out my schedule and we start looking over the classes.
"We have all classes together except social studies because you have to be a nerd and have honors social studies" I tease.
"Don't be mad because I'm smarter than you" she says giving a look of false pity. I roll my eyes and Olivia starts dragging my somewhere.
"What are you doing" I ask.
"To ask the people to show us around come on" she says pulling me along. When we get there I see about nine different people in a group and among them I see an extremely beautiful girl who has blonde hair pulled up in a bun and she is a little shorter than my sister and she has piercing blue-grey eyes. Our eyes meet but I force myself to look away from her so I don't start staring.
Olivia starts talking but I am to taken aback by that girl's beauty to focus on anything. Everyone starts to file into the building and we end up on a hallway and my locker is next to Tris' so I'm really happy about that. The bell rings and I walk with Tris, Olivia, and I think Christina towards first period. We walk in and sit towards the back and I take a seat next to Tris, of course. Then two people come in arguing about something but I zone them out. Later class starts and I stare at Tris out of the corner of my eye, eventually she looks back at me and we make eye contact and she blushes. Maybe she likes me, probably not I saw some guys staring at her in the hallway she wouldn't notice me.