~ Well before I begin, I would like to say something, I am disgusted with
the behavior of some of the people on this site, you know I am not American
I write on here to improve my English grammar, but when I have ass holes
telling me stupid shit that has nothing to do with my writing, how am I
supposed to get better? I mean, "never write again go die because I'm an
ignorant ass" is NOT going to help me. If you don't like my story tell me
how to make it better and there is NO need to be a fucking dick about it,
you don't like my story boo-fucking-hoo don't read it and if you don't have
anything intelligent to say don't review it, it is just a waste of my time.
Now on with the story ~
Johnny ran down the street as fast as his feet would take him. His chest heaved and his heart pounded but still he ran on. He approached the vacant lot and walked up to it, the eerie electric feeling came back to him, it invaded his body and made him dizzy.
"Fuck" he said aloud
He closed his eyelids tightly together as if he were trying to block out the world. His body felt like he was falling and for a moment or two he actually believed it. He became so dizzy that he lost all balance and fell to the ground, but to his surprise he did not hit dirt or grass, but concrete. Johnny opened his tightly shut eyes and looked around in amazement.
"This is unreal, this isn't happening"
Walls surrounded him, but not just any walls; they were of his old basement. They were cracked and stained, just as he remembered it to be. He casually walked up to the wall and placed his hand over it. The wall was solid and cold; it throbbed under his hand as if something were pushing on it from behind
"What the.."
Johnny put his ear up to the wall to hear muffled crying and sobs of pain.
"You bastard! That's Epiphany! Give her back to me!" Johnny pounded on the wall.
Drops of blood began to drip from the cracks, and now more vivid screams could be heard. Screams of terror and pain. Johnny cringed his teeth trying to block out the horrible noise. But it wouldn't leave, the noises were in his head loud and clear.
"Stop! God damn it! You bastard take me! Just let them live! You can have me!" he kicked the wall as hard as he could.
The old cement crumbled from the impact of his kick, and sent more cracks ripping through the walls. The old house moaned and began to shake. The wall shattered as a long spiked tentacle shot out from behind it sending pieces of debris every witch way. The serpent like arm wrapped around Johnny's waist and lifted him from the ground. It grew tighter around him choking off his supply of air.
"You're not real! You're all in my head! You hear me you...you fucking wall! You're nothing! You don't exist!" Johnny screamed almost laughing.
Johnny dropped to the ground with a loud thud sending blood from his head shooting out.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Nny? Johnny? Oh come on please wake up" a girls voice begged.
He slowly opened his eyes, everything was blurry but soon came into focus. Devi's face hovered over him along with an unfamiliar nurse.
"Where am I? Am I still in the basement? Did I survive?" a confused Johnny asked. "Johnny, what the HELL are you talking about? What basement? You slipped in a puddle of water in Epiphany's room and hit your head and ended up have a seizure from it, you've been here in hell's pass hospital for a week." Devi said raising an eyebrow.
Johnny reached up and touched his head, it was still incredibly sore. Devi and the nurse walked out of the room and spoke quietly to each other outside the door.
"Was it all just a fucked up dream?" he thought to himself
He reached down and pulled up the front of his shirt and gazed at his stomach, several bruises and long indents resembling that of a cord being rapped around his waist remained. Johnny sighed and laid back down.
~THE END~
~ok you people need to tell if you want more so go ahead! Review like you've never reviewed! ...before..(ok that was a lame IZ joke I admit but honestly let me know)~
Johnny ran down the street as fast as his feet would take him. His chest heaved and his heart pounded but still he ran on. He approached the vacant lot and walked up to it, the eerie electric feeling came back to him, it invaded his body and made him dizzy.
"Fuck" he said aloud
He closed his eyelids tightly together as if he were trying to block out the world. His body felt like he was falling and for a moment or two he actually believed it. He became so dizzy that he lost all balance and fell to the ground, but to his surprise he did not hit dirt or grass, but concrete. Johnny opened his tightly shut eyes and looked around in amazement.
"This is unreal, this isn't happening"
Walls surrounded him, but not just any walls; they were of his old basement. They were cracked and stained, just as he remembered it to be. He casually walked up to the wall and placed his hand over it. The wall was solid and cold; it throbbed under his hand as if something were pushing on it from behind
"What the.."
Johnny put his ear up to the wall to hear muffled crying and sobs of pain.
"You bastard! That's Epiphany! Give her back to me!" Johnny pounded on the wall.
Drops of blood began to drip from the cracks, and now more vivid screams could be heard. Screams of terror and pain. Johnny cringed his teeth trying to block out the horrible noise. But it wouldn't leave, the noises were in his head loud and clear.
"Stop! God damn it! You bastard take me! Just let them live! You can have me!" he kicked the wall as hard as he could.
The old cement crumbled from the impact of his kick, and sent more cracks ripping through the walls. The old house moaned and began to shake. The wall shattered as a long spiked tentacle shot out from behind it sending pieces of debris every witch way. The serpent like arm wrapped around Johnny's waist and lifted him from the ground. It grew tighter around him choking off his supply of air.
"You're not real! You're all in my head! You hear me you...you fucking wall! You're nothing! You don't exist!" Johnny screamed almost laughing.
Johnny dropped to the ground with a loud thud sending blood from his head shooting out.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Nny? Johnny? Oh come on please wake up" a girls voice begged.
He slowly opened his eyes, everything was blurry but soon came into focus. Devi's face hovered over him along with an unfamiliar nurse.
"Where am I? Am I still in the basement? Did I survive?" a confused Johnny asked. "Johnny, what the HELL are you talking about? What basement? You slipped in a puddle of water in Epiphany's room and hit your head and ended up have a seizure from it, you've been here in hell's pass hospital for a week." Devi said raising an eyebrow.
Johnny reached up and touched his head, it was still incredibly sore. Devi and the nurse walked out of the room and spoke quietly to each other outside the door.
"Was it all just a fucked up dream?" he thought to himself
He reached down and pulled up the front of his shirt and gazed at his stomach, several bruises and long indents resembling that of a cord being rapped around his waist remained. Johnny sighed and laid back down.
~THE END~
~ok you people need to tell if you want more so go ahead! Review like you've never reviewed! ...before..(ok that was a lame IZ joke I admit but honestly let me know)~