Hello and welcome to my story! This is my first Naruto fanfic that I have written and I hope you enjoy! With that said, please no flames but if you could give tips on ways to help me improve as a writer and help me improve my story they are welcome. Like I said, this is my first story so bare with me.
This story is about Naruto activating a forgotton doujutsu (not rinnegan) long thought lost by the Uzumaki. This will be a God/like and intelligent Naruto fic. I do hope you enjoy reading my story and make sure to R/R! Now on with the story!
Prolouge
Uzumaki Naruto was a seven year old boy. But to most he was the 'demon child'. Naruto never understood why the villagers couldn't treat him with kindness. They always gave him hateful glares or even stoop as low to try and harm him.
It was October 10th, seven years after the Kyuubi no Yoko's defeat. More importantly it was our young blonde hero's birthday. His seventh birthday.
And that is where we are...
"Ichiraku's here I come!" Naruto exclaimed. Naruto stood at four feet two inches. He wore a baggy orange jumpsuit that cover his body frame. He had six noticeable whisker marks three on each cheek. He had blonde hair and the bluest cerulean eyes you'll ever see.
Naruto was on his way to his favorite place to eat, Ramen Ichiraku's. The only place in Konohagakure no Sato that doesn't kick him out. It was his birthday and he wasn't going to stay cooped up in his apartment all day. Naruto was going to celebrate it with the people he considers his special people. Tuechi and Ayame Ichiraku the father and daughter duo who own Ichiraku.
When he was on his way there two Chunin level shinobi approached Naruto.
"Hey Naruto" one of the Chunin said.
"Umm...sorry but...do I know?" asked Naruto.
"Oh, how rude of me. My name is Fuzen and my friend here is Hotaru." the now named fuzen said. Fuzen was average in height standing at five feet eight inches and slightly muscular frame. He had long black hair and pitch black eyes with his forhead protector tied to his left bicep. He wore the standard green chunin flak-jacket with a black dark long-sleeved shirt underneath. He wore black anbu pants that were slightly baggy and black shinobi sandles. Fuzen was in his early to mid twenties.
"Nice to meet you" said Naruto with his foxy grin.
"Good. Now that we are acquainted back to why we came over here." said Fuzen.
"We heard it was your birthday today so we got you a gift for you." said Fuzen with and innocent smile.
"Really? You both got me a gift? Well where is it?" Naruto asked quzzically.
"Come with us and we will give you your gift when we get there" said Hotaru making himself known. Hotaru was in his late teens or early twenties. He was slightly taller then Fuzen standing at five feet ten inches. He had short brown hair with hazel eyes and his forehead protector was tied in a bandanna style. He wore the same thing as Fuzen the only difference was he wore a blue long sleeved shirt.
"Ok! Lets GO!" said Naruto thinking nothing wrong with it.
Fuzen and Hotaru started walking with Naruto in tow. But what Naruto didn't know were the ill intentions the two Chunin had in store for our young hero. They were planning on killing our favorite blonde thinking they would be seen as heroes for finishing what the Yondaime Hokage (fourth hokage) started. But what they didn't know was that a anbu with a dog mask was following them.
Fuzen and Hotaru lead Naruto to training ground 44 also named 'the forest of death'. Naruto narrowed his eyes a little an saw that they were leading him to one of the various gates. Beyond the gates were massive trees that looked almost prehistoric. "Where are we going" asked Naruto eyes Still narrowed.
"Your gift is inside, so come on" said Hotaru losing patience.
Naruto shrugged and kept following them.
30 mins later...
Fuzen and Hotaru were leading Naruto until they came to an abrubt stop.
"Hey why did we stop. Are we here?" a confused Naruto asked.
"Yes we are here" Fuzen said.
"Ok so where is my gift?" asked and impatient Naruto.
"Ha Ha what gift?" asked Hotaru mockingly.
"The gift that you and Fuzen said you had gotten me" asked Naruto as he narrowed his eyes.
"Oh right, that-" before Hotaru finished he charged at Naruto and punched him in the gut knocking the wind out of him. Naruto flew back from the force of the blow and impacted with a tree breaking a couple ribs in the process with said tree. "Gift" finished Hotaru with a menacing grin plastered on his face.
Naruto got up shakingly and glared at the two smirking Chunins.
"What...the hell...was...that for?" asked Naruto as wiped a bit of blood from his mouth.
"What was what for?" asked Hotaru mockingly.
"Quit playing games with me! Why did you bring me out here?" demanded Naruto.
"Why did we bring you out here? To kill you of course! HAHAHA!" roared Fuzen
"Wh-what" asked Naruto as he took a step back."Why?"
"Ha ha ha ha. He doesn't know why. I'll tell you why, demon!" said Hotaru.
"Because you killed our parents, our family you demon! Thats why!" finished Fuzen and seen a confused Naruto.
"Ha ha he doesn't know why everybody hates him, you would think he would figure it out by now. Pathetic." said Fuzen.
"Find out about what?" a confused Naruto asked.
"Well since your about to die it's common courtesy to tell you" Hotaru started "Do you remember how our beloved Yondaime (fourth) defeated and killed the Kyuubi no Yoko seven years ago?" Naruto nodded not knowing how this had anything to with why they wanted to kill him. "Well, that was a lie. He couldn't kill the Kyuubi so he had to do the next best thing. He sealed it away inside a newborn baby. He sealed the Kyuubi no Yoko inside you demon! Your the Kyuubi reborn!"
After hearing this Naruto just stood there in a shocked state. "You're lying! That's not true!"
"Ha ha ha ha ha! Why do you think people treat you the way they do demon! Ha ha ha" said Fuzen as he cackled maniacly.
"He's right" thought Naruto as he looked down. "The way they look at me, treat me and even try to hurt me. But I'm not the Kyuubi. I'm...I'm Uzumaki Naruto!"
"Enough procastinating! Time to die demon!" said Hotaru.
Naruto tried to get away from the two Chunins but to no avail. As Naruto turn to run he was intercepted by Fuzen. Fuzen kneed Naruto in the face breaking his nose in the process and was skyrocketed back in the opposit direction. Naruto skitted to a stop he tried to get up, keyword tried but to no avail.
Up in the trees...
"Naruto!" the dog-masked Anbu thought. He was about to jumped down and brutally kill the two Chunin. AS he was about to intercept them he felt a hand on his shoulder holding him back. He turn to see the hot and sexy snake mistress, Mitarashi Anko. She had short purple hair that was in a ponytail with a short skirt and mesh shirt with a small jacket long enough to cover her big bust. And also stood at five feet four inches.
"What are you doing! They trying to kill him!" whispered and anger anbu.
"Let's see what the gaki does"said the snake mistress.
The anbu looked at her like she was crazy. But realization set in and he remembered she was crazy. The anbu sighed and replied "Fine, but if this gets out of hand I'm stepping in no matter what! I promised to look after him and I don't like breaking my promises especially to the people I care about." the anbu stated and recieved a nod from the snake mistress.
Back with Naruto...
Naruto was leaning against a tree panting heavily."I can't move" Naruto thought. "I think I broke a couple ribs from impacting into that tree...i can hardly breath.."
Fuzen and Hotaru looked at each other and nodded to one another. They dashed to Naruto and started to beat him with no remorse. While Naruto was getting beaten he started to feel a power rising inside of himself but once he felt it, it was gone. Then there was a burning sensation in his eyes. Naruto started to scream in agony from the pain in his eyes and getting beaten by the two chunins wasn't helping either.
The chunins stop there assault on Naruto to see what was happening. A few seconds after Naruto's screaming started it subsided with Naruto panting hard until he was breathing calmly. Fuzen and Hotaru shrugged and were about to continue there assault on our favorite blonde when a pulse of chakra came from Naruto. Powerful enough to make the chunins blown back by the force of chakra.
"What the hell was that?!" exclaimed Hotaru as he he tried to get his bairings back.
"I don't know. Maybe it's another one of the demons tricks?" said Fuzen as he stood up.
They both turn there attention towards Naruto. Naruto was standing there with his bangs shadowing over his eyes. They stood there shock as they seen Naruto's cuts and bruises started sizzling away as if they were never there. Naruto reached up to his nose and with a loud POP! He resetted his nose. Fuzen and Hotaru were horrified of what they just seen.
Naruto raising his head slowly and showing his eyes. Gone were the cerulean blue eyes replaced by red eyes with black swirls that looked like whirlpools and for his pupils were three connected tomoes. Fuzen and Hotaru could feel the power radiating from Naruto's eyes.
"What the hell are you?!"Fuzen foolishly asked.
Naruto turned his attention towards Fuzen and eyes narrowed.
"Oh, but don't you already know who I am?"asked Naruto mockingly.
"You say that I am a 'demon'. But I am not. You called me the Kyuubi. But I am not. I'M UZUMAKI NARUTO! REMEMBER IT!" exclaimed Naruto as he disappeared in a show of speed.
"Where did he-" Fuzen didn't get to finish as he was sent flying back by a kick to his face. Naruto disappeared and reappeared behind Hotaru elbowing him in the back of his head sending him to the bliss of unconsciousness.
"Die demon!" Fuzen yelled with kunai in hand. Fuzen launch the kunai towards Naruto. Naruto smirked and caught the kunai and threw it back at Fuzen that imbedded into his right shoulder. Fuzen fell to the ground in pain. Naruto started to walk towards him with a bored expression on his face, with hands in pocket.
"St-stay back demon! Get away from me!" said Fuzen as he started crawl away.
"Stand up and fight coward!" Naruto ordered.
Fuzen shakily got up and took the bloody kunai out of his shoulder. Naruto smirked as he disappeared again and kneed Fuzen in the face successfully breaking his nose. Fuzen cried in agony as blood start to flow freely down his nose.
"Not so funny when it's your nose, now is it?" asked Naruto mockingly.
Fuzen gritted his teeth as he tried to swipe at Naruto with his bloody kunai. Keyword tried. Naruto dodged and punched him in the gut effectively knocking the air out of his lungs. As Fuzen was gasping for air Naruto had enough and knocked him out with a chop behind the back of the neck.
Up in the trees...
The anbu and Anko were bewildered from what they just seen.
"Kakashi did you see what I just did or am I under one of Kurenai's genjutsu's again?" a baffled Anko asked.
Getting out of his stupor the anbu now known as Kakashi replied "Yea...he took them out as if it was nothing."
A sadistic grin plastered on the snake mistress face an asked innocently "Hey Kakashi, how old is that gaki?"
Kakashi narrowed his eyes a little and replied "Seven. Why?"
"Damn...just wondering."she replied.
Back with Naruto...
After the fight Naruto started walking towards a nearby tree to lean against but he didn't make it. Naruto eyes switched back to his cerulean blue eyes and Naruto lost consciousness only for kakashi to catch him on his back. Lifting Naruto up piggyback style.
"Yo Anko" Kakashi called out.
The snake mistress jumped down from where she was to Kakashi's side. "Yea what's up."
"Take those to traitors to Hokage-sama and tell him what happen. Tell him if he needs me i'll be with Naruto at my apartment, ok."said Kakashi and recieved a nod in return.
"Rest now Naruto, you and me both know you need it" Kakashi thought as he took to the trees with Naruto sleeping soundly on his back.
And Finished! Thanks for reading please tell me how I did! And yes I did create a couple of OC's there probaly going to be the only ones I create during my story. Naruto did unlock a forgotten Doujutsu long thought lost by the Uzumaki. Please R/R and if there are any questions you may want to ask about my story thank you again!
- Kenshin out