Author's really truly last word.

June 7, 2014.

For those of you following this story or me as an author:

This was the first piece of fan fiction I had ever written. Ever in my life. So it was bound to be a little rough around the edges. Hey, I was a physics/math major!

In the 2 months since I wrote it, I think I have learned a lot about the art of writing, primarily due to the gentle nagging, I mean, mentoring of stillslightlynerdy.

Read my latest story, "The Hour of the Wolf" and see if you don't agree that I've gotten better. Please?

In any case, I decided to go back and edit every chapter of this story to eliminate superfluous commas and mixed verb tenses. Also to break up paragraphs that were too long, and make the dialogue clearer. Minor rewording to make sentences flow better.

Any remaining errors are all mine and no one else's.

There were no changes to the plot. But I do think the story reads better now. I hope you agree.