Hello there! this is my first fanfic, hope it is to your standards! ~BattleCry~

Silence. Complete and utter silence. Mistyshard had one kit, it took a long time to birth it. And they believed it to be dead. A tiny black she kit with white creeping up her chest and onto her muzzle. She was dead. The medicine cat looked and prodded at the kit. ''I am so sorry, Mistyshard. So sorry.'' The grey queen bowed her head. The medicine cat turned his attention to the kit. It was then that he noticed a slight rise and fall of the kit's flank. ''Wait a second..'' The medicine cat mumbled, bending down to the kit and nudging it over to her mothers flank. The kit wriggled to suckle. Mistyshard sighed in relief. Her first kit would survive…

Silentkit sat up near her mother, looking out at the camp. The other kits, Hawkkit and Fernkit, played moss ball outside. Silentkit blinked her big blue eyes. ''Go and play, dear.'' Her mother, Mistyshard, murmured. Silentkit bowed her head, stood up, and padded silently to the group of kits. ''What do you want, mute?'' Sneered Hawkkit as she approached. ''Dont tell me you want to play with us.'' Hawkkit said, rolling his eyes. She nervously glanced at the nursery. ''Go on, say something!'' Growled Fernkit. Silentkit blinked at them. ''Stupid cat, you will NEVER be a warror, your too dumb and insane! A warrior who cant talk. how scary'' Sneered Fernkit. Silentkit's eyes watered and she turned tail and ran to the nursery. ''Go back to your mommy, stupid mute!'' Hawkkit hissed after her. Its not my fault i cannot talk, she thought in her head. Silencekit crashed through the nursery entrance, jumping into her nest. ''Its okay Silencekit, its okay.'' Soothed her mother. No, its not okay, thought Silencekit with a sob.

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