Ok,

Normally I hate to read AN but many questions came up in reviews about what's going on my story.

Here's what's going on.

First, I put the first three chapters and got review that I should get a Beta (totallyignorable). Currently, I'm working with each of the chapter. That's why it's well grammar somewhere and other chapters not.

Secondly, English is not my first language. Small reminder.

Thirdly, many ask about how reality show as guest said isn't heavily scripted. I understand that YOUR reality show is normally consist of DRAMA and SCRIPTED ! BUT in mine, we are letting the girls chosen by the man (Jace for example) free. They act as they want on TV. Not scripter, we are respecting the girl and moral. If you don't like it that why don't read it and make your own. Like I'm sorry, many would be mad at me because I'm not representation some reality show american or somewhere else. But, I want to be the most of my value and my characters have their own value!

No offense to NO ONE!

Ploiuiu.