The Revision

Chapter 1: The Gift

I do not own Dragonball, DBZ, DBGT, or DBM.

On the Planet Kanassa, five Saiyan warriors relaxed comfortably in the city ruins. They reveled over their trivial victory of the conquest. All five warriors were diverse in appearance and physical shape.

There was Fasha, the fiery female of the squad. She had black mop of spikey bangs and had purple eyes. She wore black and gold battle armor with one shoulder pad with a pink undergarment.

Borgos is a silent, but large mountain of a man who was balding but had black spikey hair on the sides. He had three scars on his forehead and wore black, blue and gold battle armor with black pants and black gauntlets and boots.

Next was Shugesh, a burly Saiyan with a fresh scar on his cheek. He wore black and cyan battle armor with a tattered green undergarment and celt.

Tora, the second strongest of the squad, had a black spikey mullet and wore a black and light blue battle suit with shoulder pads. He was best friends with the squad leader.

And finally, Bardock is the leader of the Saiyan group. He had unkempt hair which partially stands on end and a scar on his left cheek. He wears black and green battle armor with red arm and leg bands. He was the strongest of the low-class Saiyans.

"Dammit, that bastard Kanassan scarred my beautiful face. Hehehe…I hope he liked my boot when I crushed him." Shugesh commented.

Fasha and the others smirked at his comment. To which she said, "Well, I wouldn't say beautiful…"

Tora, Borgos and Fasha laughed while Shugesh growled "Shut up Fasha!"

"Hey, have a since of humor. I kinda think Saiyans with scars are attractive." Fasha laughed looking at Bardock, who was relaxing in a pile of rubble. He didn't even flinch at the comment.

"These Kanassans were a piece of cake after we transformed." Tora admitted.

All the Saiyans agreed while Bardock remained quiet, completely transfixed with the morning sky. The other squad mates were talking about how they didn't remember most of the battle, due to their Great Ape transformations. Fasha and Borgos agreed it was almost like a dream. Tora went on to say that Bardock seems to remember everything in battle, but Fasha quickly reminded him that Bardock can't even remember his newest son's birth, which had happened the day before.

"Yeah, but that was a long time ago." Bardock said unthinkingly.

"Wow Bardock, you can't even remember your son was born yesterday. You should really go see the little tyke; you know Hanaisa would be pissed if you didn't." Fasha told him.

"Whatever, what's the point i…" Bardock said when he was interrupted by his scouter beeping.

All the other Saiyans scouters beeped in unison as they got up from the ground looking for the source of the power.

"Hmm, power level 7,000, hardly a challenge if we fight him together." Tora pointed out.

Bardock quickly charged his Ki and took off like a bullet into the sky. "He's all mine." Bardock yelled.

"Man, was does he get to have all the fun." Fasha moped.

After a short time, Bardock came upon a ruined complex that once appeared to be a great sanctuary. He landed on the ground to find the source of the power. There, stood alone Kanassan named Toolo. He was an amphibian like creature with battle worn purple clothing. He stood brave, ready to combat the Saiyan.

"So, you're the one who gave out the large power. Impressive you're still alive." Bardock said spitefully.

"You aliens have come to my planet and ravaged my people. I am the last of my kind, but I am no fool. I may not be able to defeat you and your comrades. But perhaps I can show you the pain and suffering that you bestowed on my people!" The Kanassan survivor roared.

He rushed forward with a punch but Bardock blocked the blow, Bardock countered with a knee to the abdomen causing the Kanassan to fall to the ground. "Now, go to hell!" Bardock yelled as he shot a blue-white full power energy wave. The attack struck the Kanassan but had little effect. Instead, the blast surrounded Toolo with a white energy which he used to his benefit.

"Wait! I have seen your future, Bardock. I have seen the destruction of your people by the flat horned demon known as Frieza." Toolo prophesized.

"What…what the hell are you talking about? How do you know about that?" Bardock said shocked.

"My people have the ability to foresee into the future, some say it is a curse, but others a gift. Hehehe…even though we saw our fate and were helpless to stop you, we will be avenged in the end." The Kanassan laughed.

Toolo lunged forwards and grabbed Bardock with a bear hug, he then exploded in a brilliant array of light, sacrificing himself and passing the gift of foresight to Bardock. Bardock fell unconscious to the ground and dreamt about the coming of the end of his race.

Bardock was floating in space. It seemed so familiar. He was surrounded by an infinite number of soldiers that were attempting to stop him. Bardock looked into the distance and had seen a Planet Trade saucer ship. On top of the ship were three very distinctive figures. It was none other than Dodoria, Zarbon infamous tyrant himself, Frieza. Bardock began to utter words that he had no control of. It was almost like line from a script.

"Frieza! Come and face me you coward!" Frieza stood in his hover chair smiling at the Planet Vegeta; he was preparing to destroy it with his Death Ball.

"This is it, this is the end of your enslavement over us Frieza. THIS ENDS NOW!" Bardock attempted to stop him with his Final Spirit Cannon, but failed. Frieza's Death Ball engulfed Bardock and the Planet Vegeta in a firestorm from hell. And Bardock was completely helpless. He felt a strange sensation coming over him, "Is this how I will die?" He thought to himself.

He awoke from his dream with four figures standing over him. It was his comrades. "Bardock, you fool, that's what you get for fighting him alone. You ok?" Tora asked with a helping hand.

Bardock grabbed Tora's arm as he lifted Bardock from the ground. The Saiyan squad leader was dazed and confused. He thought the apparition was just a mere dream. However, it seemed so real. It felt like he had actually died when Frieza's attack destroyed him and his home world. Bardock was rubbing his head in frustration on what had just happened.

"Man, you don't look so good Bardock." Shugesh pointed out.

Bardock had been dealt a great deal of damage. His armor was tattered and broken. He had cuts and charred burns all over his body. He looked like a walking corpse. Bardock however, seemed to ignore these injuries and seemed to be in deep thought.

"What's on your mind Bardock?" Borgos spoke up.

Bardock had finally answered his comrades he was literally shaking with anxiety and frustration. "Fr-Frieza, its Frieza! He…destroyed our planet.…"

The four Saiyans stared at each other in disbelief. Has Bardock gone mad? Have all these years of fighting, conquering, and killing caught up with him? "He's lost it. Maybe that Kanassan really damaged his mind." Shugesh said.

"No. Something is seriously wrong here guys. All these years of fighting with Bardock, he's never acted like this before..." Tora retorted.

"We have to go back now! We must warn King Vegeta." Bardock said.

The Saiyan team mates were in complete shock and disbelief. Is Bardock telling the truth? Or is something seriously wrong with him? Tora, Fasha, Shugesh and Borgos had no choice. They had to trust in their commander; even if he was insane. The five Saiyans went into their attack balls. But Tora was the last to enter his own. He walked over to Bardock's and asked "What makes you so sure Bardock? How do you know this is going to happen? Even so, how are you going to convince Vegeta of all people, of this hypothesis?"

Bardock looked Tora straight in the eyes and said "We've been friends all these years Tora, just trust me on this one."

Bardock had then shut the hatch on his attack ball and fired up the engine to the vessel. "I hope your right, Bardock." Tora five attack balls went straight into space, to return home to pass on a message of the end of the world as they knew it.

The Planet Vegeta was a menacing red orb in space. It had a dry desert climate with fluctuating weather patterns. The gravity was ten times that of Earths and was a hellish place to live. No doubt it was the perfect place for the perfect warrior race.

The royal Saiyan court was gathered in the throne room of King Vegeta himself. All elites and aristocrats were in attendance. The King was a gruff man with spikey brown hair and a goatee. He wore the traditional Saiyan royal armor and cape with a family crest that represented King Vegeta's family.

Standing next to the King was Gerkin, the king's bodyguard. Gerkin was tall with long spikey black hair that extended down to his back. He wore white armor with green armor plates and shoulder pads. He was a Saiyan elite and was the strongest Saiyan.

The court was discussing affairs that were on the current agenda. "Has Nappa and my son made it to the planet Seed?" King Vegeta asked.

"Yes, milord, they are training and exterminating the planets inhabitants as we speak." Gerkin assured.

"Good, Frieza better know what he is doing, I don't need my son getting bored with the missions he's giving our prince." King Vegeta replied.

"Yes, he is quite the prodigy your highness, I heard he killed several Saibaman without laying a finger to him." Gerkin sucked up.

"Quite, he will become a Super Saiyan one day, you'll see, and we will be free of that tyrant Frieza. Gerkin, weren't you going to tell me something about some child that was born?" Vegeta questioned.

"Oh! Yes sir, there was a child that we decided to withhold on going on a mission. He was reported to have been born with a power level of over ten-thousand; his name is Broly." Gerkin said.

"Ten-thousand? Impossible! Who are the parents of this…Broly?" Vegeta exclaimed.

"The mother was some low class that died during labor. The father is a middle class named Paragus." Gerkin told.

"No one will be stronger than my son. Bring me Paragus; we need to eliminate his child at once." King Vegeta commanded.

Bardock had decided to heal shortly in the medical bay while Planthorr and Malaka observed him. The Saiyan squad decided to go to the food court to grab a bite while Bardock healed. They were given specific orders not to go on any missions until Bardock was done.

"His physical health seems to be healing normally. However his mental health is strange to say the least. His brain waves are astonishing, whatever happened in Kanassa really did a number to him." The reptilian alien with an orange Mohawk known as Malaka said.

"Yes, he may be stronger than King Vegeta if he keeps getting injured like he does". The elf man Planthorr noticed.

After a short period of time Bardock was completely healed and he immediately got out of the healing tank and threw on his armor. He quickly ran out of the medical bay to go find his comrades. Running in the hallway he suddenly stopped and saw the Saiyan nursery full of babies. There he saw his son, Kakarot. Bardock clicked his scouter and the indicator gave him a number.

"Hmph, Power level is only two, what a waste." Bardock commented. Before he turned around to walk away a feminine figure was standing in the hall way leaning up against the glass.

"You know, when we were born, we didn't have these scouters to determine how strong we were. It's not always numbers that make a warrior." The female said.

It was none other than Bardock's mate, Hanasia. She was a Saiyan elite with long mangy black hair that went past her butt. She was slim and quite beautiful for a Saiyan woman. She wore dark blue armor with gold shoulder plates and one shoulder guard. She also had a red skirt and undershirt.

"Whatever, he's another failure just like the others." Bardock ignorantly said.

"These other babies have low levels too. See, this one's only 4, this one 7, and this one….ten thousand!?" Hanasia exclaimed.

"Yeah right." Bardock ignored.

A short yellow alien had then walked up to the shocked Hanasia and Bardock telling them that Kakarot would be leaving to go on his first mission in less than a week. He would be going to the Planet Earth, whose inhabitants were extremely weak. Bardock seemed to care less while Hanasia said goodbye and good luck to her young one and caught up with her mate.

"Where are you in such a hurry too? Do you not care our son is leaving? I remember when our son Raditz first left, you were so heart broken. You're changing Bardock." Hanasia nagged.

"Look, there is a lot on my mind right now, Hanasia, our son will be fine. I've foreseen it…" Bardock reminisced.

"What the hell are you talking about?" Hanasia asked.

Bardock however, quickly picked up his pace and went into the cafeteria. "Hold on! Wait!" Hanasia yelled as she went after her mate.

Bardock went into the cafeteria and told his friends he was fine. He then took off to the throne room to warn Vegeta. The others followed him worried that Bardock has completely lost it.

"Please, my King, don't kill my son! He could be a useful asset to our army! Think about it we could rule the universe with his power." The middle class Saiyan known as Paragus pleaded.

The King stroked his beard and then spoke. "No, Broly is a threat to our entire empire. He cannot be controlled. He must be taken care off."

Vegeta lifted his palm and shot a purple energy blast into Paragus's face, causing his left eye to burst from its socket and causing him excruciating pain. He was bleeding on the floor holding his eye. The guards were going to walk up to him and take him away when…

"Vegeta! Listen to me! Terrible things are going to happen!" Bardock yelled bursting into the throne room with Shugesh, Fasha, Borgos, Tora and Hanasia trailing behind.

"Bardock! How dare you interrupt a trial! You have no right! Gerkin yelled preparing to pounce on the low class Saiyan.

"Gerkin, wait, Bardock, what are you blathering about?" The King inquired.

"If you don't listen to what I have to say, Frieza will destroy us all!" Bardock foretold.

The surrounding Saiyans of the court busted out in laughter. They all mocked Bardock calling him a fool, and a madman. Tora slapped his hand on his face in embarrassment and said "He really is mad. Please forgive us King Vegeta, Bardock has just returned from a mission and he suffered a massive head injury."

"Shut up Tora. King Vegeta, if you won't listen to me, then you give me no choice. By my right as a Saiyan, I challenge you for the seat of the throne." Bardock said confidently.

Tora, Shugesh, Borgos, Fasha and even Hanasia gaped in shock and bewilderment at what Bardock just said. The court broke out in banter and hushed whispering at the challenge.

And there we have it folks, the first chapter of The Revision. I am excited to tell you all that this is my first FanFiction and my very first AU. I really like this idea of Bardock changing the future and I plan to use his as a major altering of the DBZ universe. I was inspired by Dragonball Multiverses universe 3. I will be using the idea as a foundation. I will not be copying it exactly but I will turn it into something interesting and enjoyable. I will be very dedicated to this story so expect many chapters in the near future. Please leave your review and give me your opinion! I really appreciate it!

I don't really like power levels but I will post one each chapter for a while. Here is what we got so far.

Bardock (Zenkai) 10,000

Toolo 7,000 Toolo's suicide attack 9,000

Tora 6,500

Borgos 6,000

Shugesh 6,000

Fasha 5,500

Hanasia 15,000

Gerkin 15,100

Kakarot 2

Broly 10,000

Paragus 5,750

King Vegeta to be revealed soon…

By the way I like to cite where I get my power levels from a website which has the most accurate DBZ and GT power levels in my opinion. It's the only site that doesn't go crazy with the power levels after the Namek Saga.

Ok! Tune in next time on Dragon ball The Revision!