I have been reading stories for ages and thought that I should finally write my own. Please review and tell me how I did, i realy want people to comment on what I need to change or make better. ;)

Chapter 1-Nothing More, Nothing Less

I inhaled deeply, allowing the crisp fresh air to fill my lungs. My feet wriggled intensely across the smooth freshly washed bed sheets. I loved having bare feet. They felt free, it was my sweet rush of ecstasy.

A far from devious smile slowly grew upon my face; beaming with happiness. My eyes rapidly jolted about as I discovered what it felt like to look through a big pair of married eyes. My pupils dilated from shock, similar to the effects of a dose of drugs.

I was married! For the first time ever I was actually married.

Resembling an over excited child having a sugar rush, I jumped to my feet in one swift move causing the bed to creek, making my balance seem very precarious.

I peered backwards cautiously over my shoulder making sure that Eugene was still in slumber, I didn't want to wake him.

I scurried out of bed desperately trying not to disrupt the sheets still sprawled lifelessly across his body.

I wanted to be like one of those girls who get up at insane hours of the morning and do their hair, only then to return to bed and pretend that they had not yet awoken. This then sent the impression that I looked beautiful twenty four seven and that's exactly what I was going for. However I did have a thought that no matter how hard I tried there is was no way in heaven or hell that I would get the impression of some insane jet lag to cover up (I would have needed a lot of concealer). I was just so immensely tired!

Mid-way through voyage to the newly decorated en-suit bathroom (courtesy of my parents) I halted. Out of the corner of my eye I happened to glimpse a brown, with a tinge of red, coloured stain. It was located front and back of my lacy, floral detailed night dress between my thighs. A mix of confusion and worry rose up inside me.

Was this blood?

Was I bleeding?

I glared abruptly towards the ornate wardrobe mirror stained with archaic residue of its heritage. Fear rushed through me as I prayed that my eyes must be deceiving me. What in the name was this peculiar bump that had arisen hensley over the night?

Like a well-stocked library thoughts whipped through my head as I searched for information that could have the knowledge needed to understand what it could be.

Only recently had I learnt about the delicate subject of sex and reproduction and all the books that had captivated me portrayed that it would take months to know if a child had been conceived so to my knowledge this could not be an unborn baby. Last night was my first time.

I had read one story about a woman, a virgin, had given born to a child but it was only a story. A fairy-tale.

I came to the quick conclusion that the stain was from my broken hymen because my body was also hurting and full of aching pains. But the bump still alluded me.

I pressed my dainty fingers against the skin of my stomach, allowing my palms to follow. Gently, I massaged the area.

Suddenly a piercing high-pitched noise vibrated through my ears and ricocheted around the room as everything else fell silent.

The birds stopped singing.

My heart stopped beating.

Eugene stopped breathing.

Everything was silent, nothing was to be heard because something, I didn't know what, but something moved inside me. Something kicked its foot.

In the absence of blurred vision, blurred hearing came instead. A shaky spider like hand grasped savagely at my shoulder. My entire body swivelled elegantly like ballerina. It was Eugene. His eyes were full of fear. He said something but I couldn't hear him, I was still in shock.

By focusing in on his mouth I could make out his words "What is that?" nothing more nothing less only the fact there was slight quiver on his lips. It was all most likely in the tone but I could see by his expression the appropriate response. Our eyes met and locked together.

"I don't know." Again nothing more… and nothing less.