I love your story, Toby and Tia are so well portrayed, and the plot line is really good almost as if it was from the show and it's so real. honestly, I would love to see a continuation to this

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WIshed you continued with this. seems good

I really enjoyed your story. It's well written and you did a great job portraying both Toby and Tia. I hope you write more The Listener fanfiction.

This is a great start to what may be an awesome story! Intriguing and detailed. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I love this, nice to see some listener fic still being written. You do a nice job of making Tia (so badly introduced and used in the show) more real and likable.