Wow, this is incredible! Such a fascinating idea, someone literally dreaming themselves into another reality. I feel like there's more to it though than simply Kaz's mind playing tricks on her...
Anyway, it sucks that Jay wouldn't look at her; I hope he's just still in shock or something, because it would be too heartbreaking for him to abandon Kaz.
I'm also curious about the role of that detective. We keep getting his perspective when I thought his part would have been over.
I was pleased to see Radagast appear in the dungeons. People don't often think about where he was in the story, and it is definitely within the realm of possibility for Saruman to have imprisoned him somewhere. Though I do wonder whether a simple dungeon cell would have been able to hold him, with Radagast being a wizard and all.
And man, it would be exhausting for your dreams to be so real; your mind wouldn't be able to rest!
Anyway, I absolutely adore this story! But it looks like it's been awhile since you've worked on it. Are you planning to continue?

This story is incredible! Very realistic and extremely imaginative all in one go, bravo! I would say I want more but NO, I NEED more. This story has kept me up late reading only to read again first thing in the morning as I burnt breakfast (don't worry, my kids didn't mind). Please update soon, I'm anticipating your work with delight!

HOLY SHIT THIS IS SO GOOD! PLEASE COME BACK! YOU WRITE GOOD CHASE SCENES!

Missing reading this story and hoping that you'll come back soon dear~

You're never going to update again are you?

Okay, I'm stumped on why this story hasn't been continued in over a year. I'm really getting into this and suddenly there's nothing after chapter 11? Break my heart, why don't you! I hope that this will be resumed shortly. I can understand if life gets in the way but hopefully you'll bring us to the next part of this intriguing saga.

This is interesting because usually when you have a girl-in-middle-earth story, it's like their lives before never existed. Kaz still has hers, and each one has it's own plot and characters to go with it. I really like the concept. Although it seems like you haven't updated in a long while. I hope you pick this story up again! I really want to find out what happens!

I know it's been over a year, but it's the second time I'm reading this story, and I love it! Please update soon!

Please update!

Im really hoping that you pick up this story again. it is by far my favorite lotr fanfiction yet and the fellowship hasnt even been introduced yet! It kills me to know that I wont be able to finish reading this story

very interesting story. i hope you will update it soon

Hi there c: I'd really like to start with how amazingly creative it is. I've seen many a writer's try to do the "Universe Transportation Through Sleep" story and they were pretty much unsuccessful. However, your story has caught my attention from the very beginning. It's well put together, appropriately horrifying, and yet has a subtle humour to go with it. I've enjoyed your writing so far, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next, especially since you left on a cliffhanger. I also look forward to how you make the universes collide c;
Happy typing!

I'm really hoping.. on the verge of desperation here actually xD.. that you're not abandoning this story. Unless you have writer's block or you're just really busy, I can understand. This story really deserves to be continued but you also deserve time to yourself so I really hope you don't feel pressured by us, your fans, or that we're nagging on you haha.

I do hope you'll be able to get the time to update again... though, I'd hate to nag. You have your own life to live and you've still got anytime to finish this... so it's understandable if you want to take your time as long as you want. Please, don't feel forced or obligated to do as your fans/readers wish. People like me will understand, I mean at least you've given us an amazing and unique story to start with :).

I really hope you aren't abandoning this story. I really like it and would love to know what happens next.