Reviews for A Tide's Warning |
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![]() ![]() Please update so that we can see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this soon! I would actually literally start to laugh if her father came up and started to lecture her while she was surfing. If he tried to take her home, well, I hope Natsu saves her! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love ur fanfic update soon ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really do like the story! The plot is definitely original although I'm not a fan of Lisanna-bashing. I honestly have no idea what her wish was but I really want to find out! Your idea is great, however the story itself has many spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes. So my suggestion to you is to either find a beta reader (an editor) to help you with those parts or just fix everything yourself. But otherwise, interesting and original plot and I am very interested in seeing a continuation! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! I wanna hear more! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This might be interesting. Will wait for more chapters to come. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story! It's really cool! I would love to keep reading it! |