Reviews for Ōnyūdō
xBookEaterx chapter 5 . 4/30/2016
Please please pleaaaase update! This is amazing!
Guest chapter 5 . 7/3/2014
Man, I absolutely love this type of combination Edward as a ninja and a alchemist in Attack on titans brilliant combination. Now if only Naruto and his friends where there that would really get interesting.
urs-v chapter 5 . 5/16/2014
Edawrds is a bit out of character here, and kinde a bit too much of the typical "I'm migthy and you are not, I'm so much above you you can't even begin to understand it" probably a bit of overpowered too.
urs-v chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
Well! Shungeki no Kyojin to have some appeal, even with all these death. At some point I was wondering if it was usefull to even try to remember a character's name since he was likely bound to die 3 koma latter...

Edward Elric is awesome.

Naruto's plot is getting weirder evry day, but the universe itself is great.

So why not some weird mix? I'm that blazé and desesperate to read something good to pass over that "very weird" flaw of your fiction.
Ditto for the announced weirdness (OC from Narutoverse joining the fun for some reason)

And I totally agree with the amestrian/"land of the wall-ian" parallel.

Beside, I found your writting fluent and fun to read.
nickz24 chapter 5 . 4/28/2014
So I read from chapter 1 to this chapter. I gotta I like it a lot. I will admit I am here & there with the naruto abilities mixed with Edward (wanting him to be the way he was) but it is working decently so far.
BLacKxBUrN chapter 3 . 4/9/2014
WHOA!
Saberguy chapter 2 . 3/31/2014
Another good update.

I like the way you confirmed that they have not seen alchemy by showing it to them and then pretending that nothing happened
Saberguy chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
You should continue writing this. There are not many fics that cross from three different dimensions at the same time and your seems like it will be written well.
I await your update.
mandarinnnnnnn chapter 2 . 2/21/2014
LOVE THE STORY !
BLacKxBUrN chapter 2 . 1/28/2014
Yo! Stay classy