Need more

Ruby:hey yang,jaune hat is up with you to you have been acting weard
Jaune:what nothing is up with us nothing at all RIGHT YANG
Yang:ya nothing at all little sis

30 minutes later jaune and yang are on the staircase kissing
Yang:RUBY ITS NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE
Ruby:so that's what's up with you to lovers

P. story I love this and the other dragon Slayer fan fiction that you did named gilty keep up the good work and keep doing what you love

PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE MORE DRAGONSLAYER

Good smut
Approve need an add on story arc

Good story

... I usually don't review and read lemon, or anything of that nature... But this was UNIQUE, very well written and just plain out unbelievable. Very good work. This is definitely going in my favorites.

Amazing

Your proofreading could be better but all in all the fic was enjoyable and cute at the end. Maybe a few years too late but would love more.

Glad to dig up this not-so-old gem of a smut rwby's bbb (blonde beauty badass). As with the other readers who reviewed yeah the smut part should have been a little longer, but i liked the intimate parts of yang & jaune (needed fic like these to alleviate my anxiety over what happened to yang recently as well as the plot of rwby in general).

That was good and arousing, just as juicy Lemon should be. I do feel, however, the sex itself could have been extended and played with more. Like switching positions, describing their sensations. That was done well enough during the soapy foreplay. But usually, it's better to read a story rather than only knowing that there was a story; this is how the sex went VS they had sex.

Overall, not bad.

Damn that was clean

A great story for one of my favorite ships! Nice work!

I want to be white boy jaune and fuk yang slut long

This was a very decent one-shot. Honestly, I really enjoyed reading it.

A couple of minor spelling/grammer mistakes, but I've seen a hell of a lot worse! XD

Keep up the good work!

Kind regards,
Johan

great story. I would love to see it get more chapters