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thats so sweet oh my stars

I agree that you should expand it. This made me cry so much

please expand this into a full story!

Reading this was an interesting experience, in a good way of course.
Haven't seen any story like this before.
Nice work.

It's too short for my liking, but I can't say I didn't like it. To be honest, it's completely opposite; I love it.

love the idea. would be great if you expanded on it.

This was super cute!

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Really interesting take on the whole story. I hope you find inspiration to continue this someday. Could Harry have gained an attachment/attune,net to death having been so intimately touched at a young age through the avada kedavra? Like his soul was more anchored/attracted to leaving life hence why is so reckless, his constant brushes with death not helping his fascination? He doesn't even have to be alive when he returns death's gifts since the needle story was a lie and the gifts were for death's sought consorts. A consort wpuld be someone of equal footing with death and that couldn't be someone alive, much less immortal... Anyway, hope you continue this

This is uncomfortably beautiful. I love it.
Emma

I love it it's so original I'm kind of in shock so so good

OMG OMG OMG SO SWEEEEEEEEEETTT!

PLEASE CONTINUE! This is so sweet. it would be really cool if this turned into a real story(especially if it was turned into a Supernatural crossover, though if you're not into that, it's fine, I would still LOVE to read a continuation of this). I love your writing, by the way, it's super fantabulastic!

I love this idea. And I would be very interested if you fleshed out the story. Seeing how their relationship came to be would be very interesting.