Reviews for Beginnings
Guest chapter 8 . 5/17
Very precious love story!
Guest chapter 8 . 1/13
Love this very sweet story of the wonderful Caroline and Kate!
Jazz chapter 8 . 12/11/2019
I'm reading this story again and I can see why I loved it the first time around. A truely beautiful love story. Thank you
Guest chapter 8 . 9/15/2019
Absolutely wonderfully touching story
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2019
Five years on and I still find this story as perfect as it gets. Though, Various Flumps’ other LTIH fics rival that perfection.
Guest chapter 8 . 2/19/2019
This is really amazing how you captured both their characters in filling in caroline's innermost done! And thank you
Guest chapter 8 . 1/23/2019
So for some reason I never was aware there were later chapters to this story. I went back to look for it after recalling it from the depths of my memory when giggling over the price of kitchen utensils in John Lewis. And what a fantastic surprise to find that it continued after those initial chapters. Such a lovely story; and your writing captures those inconsequential moments of coupledom as well as the momentous ones so darn well. It’s the same reason that your Berena story is one of my favourites. And as I stopped watching LTiH once I got wind of the season 3 debacle, this will now become canon for me. So thank you, truly, and I hope you continue writing for whatever muse takes your fancy.
Jazz chapter 8 . 7/29/2018
Beautiful, beautiful story. So full of emotion and honesty. You so brought Caroline and Kate to life on the page. Thank you
Fleur27 chapter 8 . 3/16/2018
Holy cow- I love this story so much. Their voices are perfect and the feelings seem so right on. I love how Kate is calm and steady and patient and unfazed by how much of a headwreck Caroline can be. Caroline's inner dialogue rings so true. And, best of all, they get a happy ending.
Thank you so much for writing this amazing loveliness.
Diane chapter 8 . 5/4/2017
Oh I loved this story so very much! You captured Caroline and Kate's essences perfectly. The dialogue is spot-on, and the emotions tender and genuine. Please keep on writing. Warmly, Diane
Diane chapter 8 . 7/18/2016
Dear Various Flumps, Wow! What a wonderful, glorious story about Caroline and Kate. Beautifully composed, lovingly executed. YOU are a sensitive writer. Thank you! Sincerely, Diane
Earl Grey chapter 8 . 12/13/2015
Lovely! Delightful in every way! Thank-you, I just have to periodically reread this wonderful fanfic!
Guest chapter 8 . 7/20/2015
300 out of 10. Please write some more stories. Just absolutely fabulous.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2015
I really find it difficult to understand why so many people fail to understand the difference between heal and heel. They sound the same but are completely different. One is a verb and one is a noun.

The heel of your hand.

How long does it take for a wound to heal.

Apart from that a magnificent chapter.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/20/2015
Super.
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