| Reviews for The Tainted World |
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peachybubblegum1102gmail.com chapter 33 . 12/30/2016 Beautiful! I love the words you use to express their feelings |
R. J. Niner chapter 33 . 1/14/2015 First off, you deserve a standing ovation that lasts ten million years, for writing this story and for finishing it with such a beautiful ending. This was honestly one of the best fanfics I've ever read, especially with your use of words to turn what could be seen as a typical "cold-hearted murderer falls in love and struggles to change her life's ways" plot into something much more detailed and amazing I would've never guessed the ending you had planned for the story. I always thought it was Len that was going to end up dying, but the ending really took me by surprise. I really liked how it's sorta an open-ended finale where the story could've been a dream, or Admodia Miku really had died (which really upset me when I got to that part... T-T) and they all got reborn. But after everything Miku went through (whether it was real or not), I'm glad you managed to make it a happy ending (even modern world Len and Miku made an adorable couple!) All in all, this is an awesome story and I'm really glad to have read it! I'll be looking forward to seeing what stories you have planned next! |
R. J. Niner chapter 31 . 1/14/2015 Whoa, this was...amazing. I am so glad Miku was able to get her revenge in the end, but it was even better that you managed to strip all of Sir's evilness away to reveal that he's ultimately just a human pretending to be someone powerful. Personally I'm horrible at guessing all the hidden nuances in stories that the author may or may not be trying to imply, but I got the sense that Miku was crying because while Sir most definitely deserved what Miku did to him, she still committed quite a horrific crime against a human being that included killing two innocent people (Kanon and Anon's scene was short but really touching to see how two people with big dreams are left with nothing to rely on but each other) Anyways, you did an amazing job on this chapter! Sir got what he deserved, and I'm glad there's at least Big Al for Miku to rely on after all she'd just gone through |
KasunaVC chapter 33 . 1/13/2015 Okay. To be honest I saw that ending coming but it was still amazing how you put it. This story was warm and cold. Sweet and poisonous. Beautifully written this story was and put together perfectly with sentences worth quoting and the personalities and environments you gave them.. This story is impeccable with a few misspelled lines but it is a story worth a whole day reading... Literally :P all in all, this was a real page turner and it kept me second guessing and making me love them with every step of the story. This love story will endlessly satisfy me. Life complete. KasunaVC |
KasunaVC chapter 28 . 1/13/2015 This fight between Sir and Miku and technically Len is a great idea. Miku must fight. Live on, Miku. Live on.. Amazing |
KasunaVC chapter 26 . 1/12/2015 Is the target Len? O NAW. Gotta find out |
KasunaVC chapter 24 . 1/12/2015 "Only until I have to go to work" she says. XD. Aah, thecasual way she says that like they both lived normal, peaceful lives. Psh :P I love this story so much. |
KasunaVC chapter 23 . 1/12/2015 More badass scenes with Miku plas. :P |
KasunaVC chapter 22 . 1/12/2015 BEAUTIFUL. Die Leon, you mindless hag. I bid thee farewell as thou shall be sent to the depths of Hell, stupid Leon. Leon thinks he's so powerful? BITCH PLAZ, MIKU WILL DESTROY YOUR PATHETIC WORLD IN A MILLISECOND. Leon, you know why instead of a family tree you have a family cactus? BECAUSE YOU'RE ALL A BUNCH OF PRICKS Not including Len and Rin. |
KasunaVC chapter 21 . 1/12/2015 She's like a fricken spy working for the FBI or something. But like ten times more badass. |
KasunaVC chapter 20 . 1/12/2015 DAYUM, so badass. AAH SO GREAT. |
KasunaVC chapter 19 . 1/12/2015 NOOOOOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE. I REFUSE. I REFUSE IS NOT- AAARRGH. LEN, DON'T LEAVE. MIKU PLEASE FRICKEN MOOOOOOOOOOOOVE. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. |
KasunaVC chapter 17 . 1/12/2015 NOOOOOO. Is Kaito gonna get Sir to tell Miku to assassinate Len? D: NOO. Gotta read the next chapter. EEEK |
KasunaVC chapter 16 . 1/12/2015 This fanfic is getting more intense every chapter. More insanity and love is poured into each word Miku and Len say. Holy hell this is above and beyond a lot of people's comprehension.. I think. It's like Len is fighting an endless paradox and Miku is falling over planets and being pulled back by strings of her sinful life. That's the summary right there. BAM. Incredible. |
KasunaVC chapter 8 . 1/12/2015 AAAAAAHHH. D: SO BEAUTIFUL. Miku is AMAZING in this story. SO PROUD FOR SOME REASON |