that was amazing!1

That twist at the end! Awesome story and a little creepy at some parts, like When I was picturing the skeleton just standing there, staring at Red, and the woods are all dark...
You get my point. Great read!

This is a premise that's been done before, but I really enjoyed seeing you make it your own in some regards. Having Oak just fall over and the mother just spew out random gibberish, it takes me back to the first time I broke the game with Missingno when I was five. It was confusing for me back then, and you kinda made me relive that confusion all over again.
Kudos on a very nice, well done little fic.

You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it's a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you're thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.

Dialogue is written as "Hello," he said or "Hello!" he said, never "Hello." He said or "Hello." he said or "Hello," He said or "Hello" he said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb, in which case it's written as "Hello." He grinned, never "Hello," he grinned or "Hello," He grinned. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's "Hi," he said. "This is it." not "Hi," he said, "this is it." or "Hi," he said "this is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," he said, "is it." If there's no speech verb in the break, you use a dash, like "Hi. This - " He looked around. "- is it."

Well, this is an old plot but you execute it quite well.

Yeah, MissingNo really does ruin everything, right? LOL
Very well written!

I like this story very much, Mine is not like this. More like a drabble or something...
Feel free to check it out! its called
Ghosts life in short words