It's goodles but there is a lot of spelling mistakes

please write the next chapter

When are you next updating?

ah yes. 女儿就是泼出去的水

Not gonna lie, I think Artemis needed to hear what Perseus said to her. If you just get chores and chores on end.

Shame you gave up on this story

pls update

bruh, why did ya turn a perfectly great story into a stupid lemon!?

I finally remembered the name of this fanfic after 2 years when I read it. Im so glad I found. :D

Please update the stories! I've read the entire series 5 times now! please write more!

BTW, the chapter I was talking about is chapter 19, right at the end when Percy and Artemis are talking after Artemis cums into the bathtub and thinks it's contaminated.

Hi... I know this is really random, but I just finished re-reading this fic and I stopped on the chapter where Percy says he would love to take a bath in Artemis's cum and I was wondering if you could make a chapter about that... if you are still updating this fic. You know... Start with Percy giving Artemis anal with his dick, and that is how they fill the tub, and then once it is full, they continue the sex in the tub. ( No Diana because she was not introduced yet.) Just a random idea that came to me, bye.

What a disappointment, this was a very erotic and beautiful story. Even with the grammar and such it was fantastic. But why stop? I don't get it... so much support from fans and you cut the story... sigh, it was so good.

This is an incredible fanfiction but where is the rest of the story. 64 chapters and you've just left it? Why waste so much time and dedicate so much effort for it all to amount to an unfinished piece of work! Please give us more updates. We need this to be completed

OK I'm on ch20 now and it seems to be working out OK. I'm glad she's starting to treat him better and I'm looking forward to everyone else's reactions