| Reviews for A Shot in the Dark |
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THiaLieN chapter 1 . 11/12/2019 It's funny that sometimes I avoid your stories, because of several reasons. But found myself drawn back to them over the years. Your OCs are amazing. I love these short stories too. |
John Smith chapter 1 . 6/21/2019 This was genuinely adorable and a great read. Love it! |
guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2019 ahhh loved this |
pandorias chapter 1 . 5/28/2018 I really like this story! Have you thought about writing some sort of sequel? I'd like to hear more about Baralin's thoughts about our warrior prince ;) |
Whyamiobsessed chapter 1 . 7/22/2017 I would love to see this story expanded into a larger story! I think it would be great to see Legolas teaching, training, and being a role model for other warriors. |
Hawaiichick chapter 1 . 2/2/2017 It's always a pleasure to see Legolas through the eyes of others. A fun story. |
Mashpotatoe Queen chapter 1 . 8/29/2016 *Mushes Baralin's face* *Gives Legolas a hug* *Glomps Legolas' friends and archers* STOP BEING SO ADORABLE ALL OF YOU! This is so well written and amazing! It provides such a keen insight on elvish culture and the people of the woodland realm. "He just looks disappointed and that is so much worse" ~I LOVE THIS BIT! Thank you for writing such a lovely story! |
Ne'ith5 chapter 1 . 3/1/2016 More Please? |
T'Challa2002 chapter 1 . 12/18/2015 Nice story! Inwouldn't mind to read more ;)hint hint;) |
AmberRiver02 chapter 1 . 11/9/2015 Legolas was potrayed a little differently than I expected, but I like his reassuring and cheerful nature.:) Nice pov and very well written and in a way, sweet. :) |
PercyJacksonAlways chapter 1 . 8/17/2015 Hi Jedi Sapphire! I've recently come across your stories, and spent about a few days scrolling and reading through your very long list of published LOTR stories, and I couldn't believe that I've never noticed all of these till now. I love your light-hearted, friendship, family, humour stories so much! Even some of the other genres are nice to read when I'm taking a break from my studies :) I really do want to review your other stories too, but the other part of me wanted to inhale every last LOTR story you have written. Yeah. So here I am now. This was the last of the LOTR stories I've read (not in order, of course), and so I'm writing you this review :D In all honesty, I think this story (and your others too), is really really good. Better than good even. You wrote Legolas exactly as how I see him. Kind, good leader, that bit of elf-pride, yet not wanting to be labeled as prince amongst his friends. Even in your other stories, I loved the way you portray Aragorn and Thranduil (YASS! ESPECIALLY THRANDUIL). You gave Thranduil that protective father personality, where he tries his best to be stern and angry at Legolas, but his heart ends up spoiling everything :') And Faramir too. Oh there is so much I could say about your writing! Anyway, I really, really enjoy reading your stories, plus your ideas are very original and fun to read. And also, I just wanted to maybe...you can say no, of course...have a request for a story? Please? I've not seen even one story in the entire fanfiction archive where Thranduil spars with Legolas. Do you think you could do me a huge favour and write one like that? I'd like Thranduil to win too. It would be great to watch the King and Prince battling it out :) If you don't want to, it's totally okay. I understand it may not be something you like to write about, and just forget about it. You'll still be my favourite writer for LOTR :) Sorry for this insanely long review. I'm not sure if you even read this since this story was posted more than a year ago. But I do hope you still see this. Thanks again! ~PercyJacksonAlways |
sleipnirfenris chapter 1 . 3/12/2015 Lovely! Can't complain about anything! |
Stormcutter684 chapter 1 . 2/26/2015 Awwwww :) How sweet! I wish I could do archery. :D |
elise chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 Very lovely! :) Ty! |
SparkyTAS chapter 1 . 1/12/2015 I like this, it's a great start. I'd like to read more. |