im scared

Um. That's BS. Elsa is a goddess and can't be over come by anyone. Oh and the guards would not try to stop Elsa. If they did then it would be an act of treason.

this chapter is sad. plain sad. it's painfully truthful, but still sad. I both hate and love this

This ending is really silly (and cruel) except for Hans. You do realize Elsa is an absolute monarch? She can pardon Kristoff and the guards are not going to attack her (and could never kill her because she is CRAZY powerful). She might have a revolt if she tried to legalize incest, but no one is going to attack her for doing whatever she wants. Silly, silly ending.

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This was so fucked, but I loved it so much, I wish there was more.

nice sad ending...

Maybe its just my depression... I didn't bother to read chapters 2-4, but I find it incredibly sad that Elsa died and I just wish there was something I could do to change that. Laugh in my face, its just a story and a fucked up one as well, it just is going to make me restless this night, and maybe the next... I applaud you for keeping the fiction up even after all of the "criticism"... May not be good for my heart but that doesn't mean it's bad for everyone else's.

I google ELSANNA, chapter 2, beastiality… wut?

OK AY WHAT THEF UCK .. . . ARE U SHIT TING ME.../.../. THE HELL IS THIS.

YOU NASTY...THEF UCK!

GAWD DAMN...that..ended...ummm...badly?

Your a disgusting some proper stories.
I know I shouldn't have read it if I didn't like it,but this isn't the sort of stuff you should be posting on a fanfiction site.I read stories off this site to my children and knowing these stories are on here,it makes me feel sick,knowing dirty people like you are in the world!

Dude don't listen to what HALF these people say about your stuff and it's disturbing and how it wouldn't happen. It does happen. There are stories. Necrophilia (or whatever) DOES happen. I can see why Hans did it. I've studied serial killers. Your explanation was good. The bestiality was good. (I mean not like I got or anything off of it lol) but I believe it. Olaf was disturbing lol. I was like...what is he doing? Lol. But yeah. Half these people need to get their heads out of their ass*s and realize A) this crap does happen know matter how 'gross it is' and b) it's fanfiction. You can write about whatever the f*ck you want to. Who cares if you've seen the movie. It's called Taboo for a reason. Don't read it if you don't like it. Don't hate appreciate. Your writing is really good and dark. Kinda sucked that everyone they've cared about has died. Poor Olaf. :'(

Wow. It was good and then BAM all depressing... that sucked. For everyone. All though looking back I can see how it led up to that. Good job.

BOOOO WHY DID YOU MAKE ELSA DIE

I HATE YOI
I HATE YOU
I HATE YOU