Im still following!

"Friends let friends cook each other, Toothless." XD XD XD I died laughing. I like this so far! I'm kinda confused as to how the dragons are talking, but it's not too much of a deterrent. The way you write Hiccup and Toothless is fantastic, it reminds me of the banter I fell in love with in Hitchups. The plot seems interesting and consistent, and the individual scenes are well-written. Pacing and timeline as a whole are somewhat confusing, though; it's hard to tell sometimes what the time lapse is, and what exactly the transitional narration is referring to. Overall, a very good story, and I will read and review more if it's ever continued!

this was a good chapter!
p.s i am the same person who commented earlier, only this time, i am on my phone. and i dont really feel like logging on. ha!

Gosh, you're a fantastic writer. Already I'm totaly drawn into the story. Poor Hiccup! I wan to break the fourth wall and give him a hug.

I LOVE THIS!

Looks like I found that time sooner than I thought I would. This was fantastic! Dialogue comes pretty easily to me, and you were excellent with it - the two seemed very in character and all the conversations flowed very naturally.
Oh god, those dreams... Maybe it has something to do with something/one called Spiderhead? Or some Norse mythology? I don't have any idea.
I can't wait to see my boys on their vacation. And it'll take Stoick a while to catch on, 'cause of his hangover. He probably won't be too pleased though. I can't wait to read the next chapter, because this one was fantastic.

Snap, this is so good. I love Gobber and Hiccup's friendship - there must be so much behind the scenes stuff. I'll have to try to read the next chapter as soon as I can. Everything is in character and I'm excited to see where you take it from there. Hiccup, especially, was perfect. It really felt like it was his internal monologue and thought process, so kudos to you! I'm so excited - I would read more right now, but I still have so much homework. I guess this can be a motivation for me then. Happy belated birthday!

Great comeback ! Update soon

Awesome way to begin your story! I looking forward to your next update:)