An excellent story. What a shame it remains unfinished.

This is great! Please update!

As I am enjoying this, I hope continue writing it one day.

I'm quite enjoying this. I realise my corrections might make that hard to tell. Though your grammar and punctuation really aren't that bad. There are many authors on here that are far worse, even though English is their first language.

"Around one individual in particular" or "particularly around one individual" would work better than "around particularly one individual." Though I see the logic that led you there.

"As you wish my lord" should be "as you wish, my Lord." Cousin, when used as a term of address, should be given the same treatment with a comma and capital letter.

If you're going for British spellings and whatnot, might I recommend a couple of changes? Apologize should be apologise. And you should use Oxford commas. For example: one, two, and three. Rather than one, two and three.

Nooooooo. Please update! Great story!-Rosie

I really hope you update soon! :)

*cough, cough*...
*ahem*
*looks at you with puppy dog eyes*

Would love it if you would come back to the story.

And really, someone need to tell Arthur that he has the emotional range of a toad.

I just started reading and I miss you already! Please update!

Here take this *hands over Excalibur* slay the dreaded beast that is writers block if he plagues you!

Dude... 'Prancing Pony' really? that's the tavern in 'Bree' out of LOTR!

We are still with you my friend, anxiously awaiting your return. I do hope you will keep your word and update soon.

You didn't abbandon this work did you? Please update Soon

Please update this story! I want to know where it's going! I really enjoyed it!