6 ft 6 is too short to be an NBA center

Im crying. Damn you, his chapter was absolutely beautiful. Your writing is good enough to be published. Thank you for this work of art.

Oh god every time I read this story I’m moved to tears. I come back and read it occasionally and whenever I do all I can think is I want someone to love me endlessly like that. Your writing is phenomenal and the connection your characters make with the reader is masterful

I'm sorry I can't say more, I more than loved this story and I wish there were many more like it.

I seriously couldn't put my Kindle down when I was reading this. It was an amazing story.

This story has touched my heart like few others have and I am grateful to have read it. This story has a way of showing that it's not just words but something real something tangible. I have read a lot of stories believe me there are very few stories that can compare this type of stories aren't just good they are special they are words that show the true power of stories. It is among the stories that show that words have the power to change the world. I love this story and hopefully someday I will look back on the fairytale I have created and remember your story. Good luck. Postscript: To make the long review short you are an amazing writer with the power to change the world with your words be careful of what you write because the changes you can make can go either way.

You are an amazing writer I'm won't be surprised if one day you become a famous author. You have such a way with words and the dialogue is so natural and the amount of work you must have put into writing this now that is dedication and that is something a real writer should have. You are incredible.

I was sorta hoping that it would be Percy that had the accident because I guess he would finally get the strength to not let the same thing happen to Annabeth that happened to Tyson. I guess that it would prove how much he actually loved her but it's your story and it still works out and I really liked this story I just wanted to say that. You are a natural born writer.

I wanted to type out this review to tell you to keep writing. You have a gift just like Annabeth does in the world you created for them. In my personal opinion this story has so much more substance and is much better written than many published and award written books. I wish you could write a sequel or just one shots about Percabeths married life. This story made me want more. It was both sad and hopeful and for the second time reading it it still made me feel like I just dove into my own bubble and no one could understand it. Plz keep writing and know your readers have faith in you. I know this was a longer review but this story is just beautiful. It is story’s like this that make me think there is still hope for this shallow world we live in.

I take that back, there is plenty of romantic moments but they’re not sappy and the story isn’t centered around them, and there is such deep insight into hard topics this story doesn’t belong to only be in a fanfic website, it demands more recognition

This is so much more than a fanfic because most are (no offense) kinda shallow but this has like an inner meaning and Percabeth relationship is more than just romantic moments or saving each other it’s got WORDS like communication is sooo important ( also the book Annabeth is writing has a bit of fault in our stars and crescent stone) I love it which means my homework is neglected... oh well!

Oh my gods, I saw this ending coming from a mile away with all the foreshadowing and still I feel like I got hit by a bus. I knew Annabeth was gonna die in the end, but I'm sobbing right now. This story is so beautiful and wonderful that I might as well call it one of my favorites. I never expected it to hit me as hard as it did. If it weren't for all the characters names and nudges towards the Percy Jackson series, I'd suggest for you to publish this story. Even though it's been 6 years since you wrote it, I want to say thank for writing this story.

I seriously don't know how you do this. You are an amazing writer. You should really make your own stories, not just fanfic. I know a lot of people who need to hear things like this.

Ive read this story twice and i cried both times

just read ch 1 and if u think eragon is bad u r just plain uncultered