ADORABLE!

Cute and good story

it's beautiful

Awww, thats so cute:)

This was cute. :) Glad I found it and got to read it! :D

omg, so sweet! :3 OwO i loved it :3

That was real Beautiful! You should make one that is in Naruto's POV! I really loved it!

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This chapter is not allowed under section 3.

The use of song lyrics you do not own (translated or otherwise) are not allowed here because they contain copyrighted lyrics that you do not have the permission to reproduce.

You should try to at least write rework your story (disclaimers don't cut it) so that it references the song (like it's playing on the radio in the background) instead of posting the lyrics to it. If you don't change then your story could be removed/deleted by the admins here.

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