Excellent. Great use of magic!

Oh, this is already awesome

I’m so intrigued by this story. Never read a story with the Tom from before. Or where Sev and his bullies are fighting (?) along side eachother.

Really enjoying it so far.

Someone else recommended this story to me, and I’m really glad they did! It combines all of my favorites; SSHG, time travel, character development in otherwise maligned characters, and tons of creativity and humor. I’m a bad person and rarely bother to review, but I absolutely had to for this one!

I wanted to comment chapter by chapter or at least every few, but was too intrigued by the story to stop and gather my thoughts. I was just so thrilled by the plot and your writing!

And your Hermione...oh, she’s so kickass in this story. Love it. I am usually not a fan of Hermione/Snape as a pair, but I must admit that a young Snape with this extraordinary intelligence and good personality works wonderfully. Your Tom is unique too. I am not sure that I have seen an almost innocent, good, happy Tom all that much in other stories, even when he doesn’t become all evil.

Hermione is my favorite HP character. Really happy to have found this one and am looking forward to reading your other stories. I do put in my vote too for a sequel to this if you were so inclined. Thanks for writing and I hope you keep on doing so!

Wow! Fantastic first two chapters. What a chance for Severus.

I so enjoyed this story. I’ve been making my way through your entire collection of fics and they’re all lovely, but I literally dreamed about this one last night! So creative, so fun. Hermione is a little over powered, per usual, but I can’t help but love it anyways. Thank you for bringing light to my days, giving me butterflies, and making me laugh out loud!

This is a very, very interesting story concept. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Great story! Absolutely love the plot and the characters! Thank you for sharing another wonderful tale.

Such a lovely story! Thank you ️

I looooooved this story OMG! It was amazing, and just the right length too. I really like this universe, maybe you could write a prequel or a sequel?
Thanks,
Me

This was amazing! Tom, Severus, Draco... Oh my! They're all perfect!

I don't think I've ever read a story with such a fantastic concept.
I have never left a review on this page and I think your story is the best for the first time.
I completely loved Tom, because even though Hermione made him a good person, throughout the story you could see traits of evil in him, but since finally the whole trip that was the story, did it once and for all, someone who was able to leave behind all his dark side.
The characters were just... Wow, and I have nothing more to say.
The best Severus / Hermione story I've ever read and without a doubt the most interesting concept I've read in my whole damn life.

I enjoyed the story and the unique plot line. Also, I like how Artemis made an appearance too. The last few chapters felt a little rushed to me.

I really really enjoyed this! Thank you!