A little dialogue heavy, but well written anyway. Depressing but a fun read. Terry's reaction to losing his friends is horrifyingly believable and the way you had it develope gave your story a lot of power. The ending struck a chord with me and I found it particularly satisfying. It gave a glimpse into the story of others and said that life still goes on.

Oh help this is painful! So well-written though. I had tears in my eyes as I reached the end. I feel that you could have done away with the "No, Ma'am. We're here with our friend Alice..." part, because it feels like a long-winded, frankly unnecessary explanation. However, ignoring that, I LOVED this! Good job.