Knew this one shot was going to make me cry... read it while crying. Writing this review I’m still crying. Great job.

OMG! WHY DID YOU DO THIS?! *GROSS SOBBING*

I cried...I blamed you author. How could you. But everyone die and life was never ours to begin with.
Good bye Sakura

This was painful.

God damn it... I cried too...It was a good cry. I'm sorry for you and you're friends lost.

It's was hard to read the end of this. I could not see through my tears. I'm so sorry for your losses. My heart is with you. Thank you for sharing this.

That was beautiful, but so, so, sad.

It did reach my heart. I cried. I hope my prayer will reach both of your lossed ones, even through I never met them.

I read this at 00:08am and I started to cry after I read it all. I feel so terrible for you and your best friend and the girlfriend who died
I felt touched by this story
But remember the people who have past on will always stay in our hearts! And you can always dream about the happy moments cause they are the greatest treasure of all
Happy moments might be painfull but it keeps us strong! :)
I hope you and your best friend the best of luck and I love the story!:)

this just made me cry even though i didn't read it all yet. i lost my sister to leukemia so it especially touched my heart. :( you're an amazing writer. i look up to you!

That was a very touching story. I'm terribly sorry for you loss, as well as the lost of your friend.

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)': I'm so sorry about your best friend girlfriend, and your mother. Even though I don't know you guys my prayers go out to you. Thank you for beautiful, heart breaking sasusaku fanfic.

This was a beautiful fanfic. I am very sorry to hear the loss of your best friend's girlfriend and your mother. But they are in a better place than this world can ever be. My prayers go out to them and their friends and family and to you as well! This was very touching

So very sorry for your loss. I too have lost family members to various forms of cancer.

Cancer is a bitch that serious needs to be eradicated!

You made me cry but this was a well written story!

We all should be come Warriors in Pink!