Good god that was possibly the best smut ive ever read
Detailed, entertaining, unique, and super hot
Fantastic!

Cute and smuterific! It is AMAZEBALLS!

(Takes a deeep breath) Uhmm...(grins goofily) Yeah.

Your sequel exceeded my expectations... And as i struggle to write a coherent review to your awesome work, i will just leave you with whatever the hell is going through my mind right now:

I feel so totally mind fucked. You just. Don't. Know. And the details! The magic is in the details! Ahhhhhhh!

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you for your hard work. Please keep 'em coming. Pun fully intended.

Did I mention how sexy and awesome it is that you made Makoto a screamer? Because I don't think I did and it absolutely deserves mentioning. So I am. Mentioning how f*cking awesome this story is XP

Hope you're still fighting back against that thesis!
Rosie

Absolutely amazing. I don't think I can put it in much better terms as my brain is currently a mess on the floor. Just...wow.

I am so happy you wrote this; after I finished the first one I was hoping that you did and there it was! YAY! You are such a talented writer. This. Was. Awesome.

I am excited to read more! :D :D

You mention something about a thesis in your profile. I hope that is going well; good luck!

Thanks for writing!
FH

God damn this was ridiculously hot. In my 8 years of reading fanfics there hasn't been many that come close to your level of smut. I feel 90% of the Free! fandom makes Makoto top all the time solely based on something stupid like him being taller.. I think your portrayal of him is MUUCH more in character. I will bookmark your profile and I really hope you write more for this pairing, maybe something regarding Haru's (canon) jealousy? Since you write him as more of a dom (which I LOVE) I'd like to see your take on this. Have a nice day!

Your fucking amazing you know that? Your writing is so good! And I love love love! How you just adore makoto bottom! I adore that and there aren't that many fics with him bottoming (we need to fix this) ahhhhhhhh that was so hot! Amazing job and I can't wait for more!

Holy..my goodness...omg, this this..simply awesome awesome yes thank you 3 ! :) ...you are awesome (*.*)

That was amazing, incredible..omg (-,-)
I just just (*.*) thank yooouuu ! 3
I needed to take pauses while reading it cause it made me my goodness breathless :D ...still I'm going to read it again

I can't really think of much to say... just, you are the best person! I like how occasionally these guys break out into silly giggling fits in your stories, it's lovely, and... I really like the way you write these two in general. Thanks for the great reads. c:

this is so perfect and beautiful and god I could cry this is so good I usually don't like Haru as the top but this is just so perfect thank you

OH MY GOD
OHHHH MYGODDD
HOOMAHGEH
HUMAGEEEE
THIS WAS AMAZING. HOLY SHIT. I NEED MORE MORE MORE AGHHHH forreal tho. Oh my god. Oh my god. Can I get more marathon!sex bouts? CAN MAKOTO RIDE THE SHIT OUT OF HARU?!,!?,!:?:)$
(Accidental smiley. Leaving it there cause YOU DESERVE THE SHIT OUT OF IT!)
Actually wait I lied. Never mind about the makoto thing cause it'd probably give me a massive nosebleed and I'd literally die from all the hotness and immense blood loss.
(I'd be a liar if I said it wouldn't be worth it, tho!)

Oh man, this was totally worth the wait, not that I had to wait long for this greatness (about as long a Makoto had to wait for Haruka's return.) And the reward for my not so patient patience was more than I could have ever expected. This is a masterpiece. I enjoyed every moment of it. I had a grin a big as my face could manage as I devoured this story. It's an honor to have been the one who inspired you to write this. I could never thank you enough, but that won't stop me from trying.