| Reviews for Bats and Bugs |
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Little Liar chapter 1 . 2/20/2019 This needs work. |
Hawki chapter 1 . 8/10/2018 Not sure what to make of this. Very short, and it reads like a summary. For instance, we're told that Batman learns that the Joker was found dead, but we're not shown it. Show, don't tell, as the saying goes. Also some punctuation is off. At the end, there's no full stop after "Freeze." And with the line beginning "...from what they had gathered..." "from" should be capitalized, as it's starting a new sentence. |
Chaoshift chapter 1 . 11/27/2016 An interesting start. |
shugokage chapter 1 . 10/27/2016 Interesting start! |
Tobi-Douchebag-666 chapter 1 . 11/20/2015 Joker most likely reminded her too much of Jack, but no superpowers |
Silvercrystal.ct chapter 1 . 12/12/2014 An interesting start, the Bat seems a little off on his characterization but it's not too far away that I wouldn't be able to stand reading him. Looking forward to an update. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2014 more please |
Rhavis chapter 1 . 8/5/2014 ... the sudden cut off makes me wonder if this is the full thing. You sure you didn't miss a chunk? |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2014 This has potential I would be interested in seeing where it goes |
tarrangar chapter 1 . 3/8/2014 please continue this |
KeL chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 whyyyyy are you making Batman evil? I get it. You take issue with DC's rigid no-kill rules. And Skitter is all of the awesome. But seriously. Don't slaughter Batman's characterization by turning him into a strawman. Also, WHY WOULD YOU HAVE THE SKITTER VS JOKER FIGHT OFF-SCREEN? |
sxcond chapter 1 . 1/11/2014 Good read. Well written and almost no mistakes. Update soon please! |
skywiseskychan chapter 1 . 1/8/2014 Ooh, continue, where is this going? |
Marcus Galen Sands chapter 1 . 1/5/2014 This i wouldn't mind seeing continue. |