Maybe you should have the cats show up again.

please continue this story i love and miss it!

Awwww that stinks I really love this story

I think that drift paw should be confronted about his past by feather paw, and he ends up telling her everything, and also says that his father is at the head of a group of cats that live in the twoleg place, and he wants his son back, and will kill for him to be back? Maybe, and then drift paw ends up liking featherpaw

if only featherpaw knew what mossflight went through

I feel so sad. This story was amazing. I hope u get better. I'm ur biggest fan!

It is okay, Ivypool. I hope that you might be able to come back and continue this story, maybe during a time when you aren't busy. I have a suggestion for Driftpaw. He could be the evil the prophecy stated and that he was a spy for a bunch of mean rogues. Featherpaw begins to like him and the become mates. Later on, when Driftpaw (as a warrior) leads the rogues in and kills the leader and tries to take over. In the end, Featherpaw is torn to have to kill the one she loves, or the one she thought that she loved. You could add more on to it, I just thought it would be interesting if Driftpaw was like a spy since he doesn't like to talk about where he is from etc. I hope that you could finish this story because I really liked both this one and the first one!

Noooooooooo! Why do they always discount the story at the most intresting part!?
Well, I hope you get better and continue the story one day.

oh my great starclan!

poor little drift. i wonder what happened to his parents

Mmm. Interesting chapter, but still pretty good.

I just read the One power abd now this. I can't believe you dont have more reviews! Thia is such an amazing story! Plase don't stop writing this :3

FeatherPaw Is Always Getting Hurt c: Good Chapter Though

YAY MORE MORE MORE PLEASE IM EXCITED FOR CHAPTER 15 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE lol just got a little hyper cx

Great chapter. You're doing a great job. c: