Oh yeah, and just update with a new chapter, ur writing for ppl to see it obviously, i feel like the notification is better

Frankly i have no criticism, this is the same story but way way better, keep it up my dude
I love their dynamic too, miku does feel a little too snappy tho for my mental image of her.

Omggg im so happy i discovered dis story

This is slowly climbing its way through the hundreds of negitoro stories in my list. Let's see how high it reaches. That's only possible if you continue this, though. But take your time, I love thisss

Also I think it would be preferable if you deleted this once you're done with chapter 5, so everyone can get alerted when it gets updated. I don't really mind either way tho its up to you and the other readers

Love this, hope you continue it :D

I haven't read this story in so long (due to not being on in a long time) but recently I decided to come back and reread some old stories~ This was the first one I choose because I remembered it being really interesting! I was not disappointed one bit with the revamping :D Really good! Keep up the good work and I'm really excited for the upcoming chapter~

Now, it's been long over a year since I've read this fanfiction. I still remember it well though- so I can say that I really like your make-over! The conversations between them feel a lot more balanced as well as the development of their relationship. I also really love how Luka keeps on teasing Miku whenever she can, it's amusing. I am definetely looking forward to see the next chapter ;)

It's adorable and fun, loved how you are writting it xD
I can see that when Miku falls she will fall hard for our genie huehuehue, can't wait for it.
Theory Luka flirts is simply awesome, and now paired with Mikuo, poormiku xD
Will be waiting for next chapter

Can't wait for chapter 5! This is currently my favorite story

Mhmm, I think it's much smoother now, specially the interactions. It doesn't feel forced and flows naturally Keep up the good work :)

In terms of keeping this chapter, I think you should erase or replace it with the story. Maybe not now, but afterwards.

I've been waiting updates for AGES. I really enjoy all your chapters. looking forward for rewritten chapters! I love negitoro pairing

I love love LOVE your fic! I really like seductive Luka and flustered Miku! omg this is just the best. I really enjoyed reading your story. I swear I get all giddy and excited when I saw your update here (it's just an author's note. too bad :( )

anyways. I'll be looking forward for your rewritten chapters! I want to see sexy Luka, seductive Luka, cool Luka, oh! and jealous Luka will be awesome too! I love your fic. keep writing! xoxo

Got a bit to finish re-reading the chapters once more lel what can I say, the improvements really show, so be proud of your progress. I love the story as much as before so I am super exited to see how it continues!

Until the next chapter

Thank you for making me read this story again! I feel like it's even better than before! Luka is such a tease it's awesome Good luck with chapter 5, I look forward to it!

Hey! I remember this from when your originally posted it and I quite like what I'm reading now! Your writing style is great and you fleshed out various scenes in your rewrites and provided amazing and humorous interactions, as well as more information overall. Particularly the giant ice cream cone and in chapter 4. I eagerly look forward to chapter 5!

Reviewing because I want that next update;) This is such an adorable story, and amazingly well written~! Your writing style is wonderful, very light and yet descriptive, and I love the creativity here:) Please do keep writing, I really enjoy reading this~!

OH MY GOSH this new version is so awesome it's has so much more detail and UGH LUKA SOUNDS DELECTABLE FLIP MY INNER LUKA FANGIRL. I only read the first chapter and I already know I'm gonna fall in love with this story all over again