More please!
Keep writing! I really want to know what happens between Tamsin and Lauren!

I'm really enjoying this story. Your world-building is epic and challenging. I can't wait to see where it all goes!

Epic! Your writing is brilliant! Please continue! I love how you cast Lauren as a mage! And Dyson owing his life to her! Will Ciara live? Will Bo and Lauren get together? This is like epic Fae of Thrones/Game of Fae 3

Wow, great chapter. The detailed mythology you are creating is really fantastic and i'm itching to discover more about this warring world. I'm interested to see whether Tamsin's blood somehow has a lingering impact on Lauren, especially given this is the first time she's taken her magic in that form. She's also clearly got a whacking hit of power from it too - perhaps she'll be after more.

This is truly a sensational read and I'm looking forward to the next update. Good luck.

Going forward I can definitely see Lauren having to rethink her "morals" in order to survive.

Excellent update! I really like the interactions between Lauren and Tamsin. I like that you put them in this different world, and can't wait to see how it progresses :)

I read this last night but I forgot about my review thanks to a few other fic updates I read. Anyways enough excuses. If I understand this properly Bo, Lauren, Dyson, Ciara, Hale & Evony fight on the same side, Evony is the queen & Hale is the ruler of an allied kingdom with fealty to Evony. Tamsin meanwhile serves under a different queen who has taken Lauren & Dyson as POWs. There is quite a lot going on right now & I expect this story to only get busier as it continues but I love it. So far the Lauren part is my favorite & find myself hoping for a Lauren/Tamsin romance but Im along for the ride no matter what. Hopefully a new update soon

Great update! Love how you've written Evony :)

You're one seriously talented writer. These two chapters are fantastic. Not sure what else to say except I hope there is more to come.

Interesting