I hope that they stay, I hope that all gets better.

I'm sorry that you had a bad week, Hopefully it will only get better.

For a 'made up' story that was pretty good, Well done

Phew, I hope that we can relax for a while now.

That really was a shock,I hope that we soon have a normal Alice.

This is still a good story, All of the characters are interesting I'm glad that I started this,

It is still keeping me reading, so different from other story's Well done.

This is a very readable story, I'm enjoying it, Thank you.

This story is incredible, thank you so much for writing it, it was a true joy to read!

Ps. Totally loved how you handled the volturi in the end!

I love this story so much and I know you needed to write in the threat of the Volturi ... but they would never take her away from her mate. Yes they’d take her but they’d take him too, it’s one of their rules to never separate or intentionally harm the mate of any vampire

Excellent, I liked the vulnerability of your vampires and the complications of talents. I was sad to see this is your only story. I will hope you share with us again

How I missed this until now is mystery. I pop back in fanfiction from time to time to indulge myself, and as ALWAYS this little slice of heaven makes me smile. This chapter was perfect. This ending was perfect, and I hope one day I can buy your books off the shelves. You have a GIFT. thank you for sharing it!

What? No thank you to Edward for all of his help?

Love the Edward Alice sibling relationship!

Beautiful story, had me on the edge of my seat the entire time! Can't wait to read more of your work. A sequel to this would be great ( wink wink)