Please update

Oh my gosh you must update this fic please

Still to this day...I need more...

i beg of you to continue and let them fuck already

Just read the whole 5 chapters, really good story although I have a question, now that the narrative movie is out will there be changes in the future since phenex is somehow related to mobius with the way you wrote the story?

Interesting premise. I like that this is focusing on one of the grunts of the Universal Century and not some OP Newtype teenage Gundam pilot. Really need these more nuanced and real views in UC like how they did it in Thunderbolt. So far this has been an entertaining read, a look into what some of the characters in the background have to go through while our Gundam pilots are off doing their shtick.

The first chapter was very powerful emotionally with the protagonist going through the hell of the Axis drop and losing his two comrades to Marida while he could barely do anything to get a victory. Very good job going through the desperation and defeat of what the actual canon Stark Jegan pilot must have felt.

The second chapter was okay, though sort of a minor downgrade. Nothing about it is bad per say, though I feel that there is a HUGE shift in tone and atmosphere from the first chapter with the protagonist losing his nuance and grounding and sort of becoming spastic in narration. Events will either be drawn out or just quickly rush through in a sentence, and the protagonist's inner thoughts seem to be going all over the place when not performing any actions. Plus they largely lose their professionalism that was exhibited in the first chapter and seem to act like a completely green recruit. There are a few times it reads like a casual Reader insert.

Also another thing, give this protagonist a name and an identity. It seems convoluted that no one when talking to him refuses to address him by name or doesn't acknowledge his actual identity. It's going to be really awkward when the other characters in casual conversations or thoughts refer to him just as the "Lieutenant" or Ribbons. I know that this is a nameless and silent protagonist, but even the most famous of silent protagonists have some sort of personality through their actions and at least an identity (Revan, Gordon Freeman, Chell). It kind of ruins the immersion since I can't get invested if I don't know who our protagonist is. I can't root for a complete stranger.

I like the Raven suit though. It's a nice OC suit that isn't some overpowered Super Gundam like a majority of OC mobile suits and it seems to follow in with Federation doctrine and development, something I can easily see having been a part of Unicorn.

I may have sounded a bit tough with the criticism above, but there's nothing offensive from what I read and this has still been an overall good read. Need more good-quality fics like this within the fandom.

And so one of the greatest Gundam fanfics returns... This chapter didn’t seem to advance the plot super far, but it was action packed with really descriptive combat scenes. Cya next chapter and good luck with anything going on in your life!

Please update soon this is my favorite gundam fanfiction

this is actually quite good

yep, VERY thoroughly corrupted. good luck debugging this one.

ayy boii. RX 0 Phenex hype

I'm surprised. I'm surprised that this only has twenty two reviews.

Positives first:
-This story isn't about a "Gary Stu" MC which annihilates the opposition of the flick of his wrist, there's actually struggles and the story SHOWS that he isn't the perfect soldier.

-The canon MC is actually shown to be useful in this fic.

-MC in this fic has some backstory, but would be nice if a few more plot points were utilized. Right now, there's the plot point of avenging his fallen pilots but, it would be beneficial if say you had one more major character die in the story to truly give him a push for anything you have planned for the character.

-Dedication and chapter size, holy shit.

Now onto the negatives.

-The Raven, such a good suit was simply put to waste. Hopefully it will come back?

I'm honestly scraping my mind for negatives, I can't think of that many.

Honestly, giving Mobius 1/Ribbons a rival would be a good idea. I mean, Purple Geara Zulu guy is a rival, but if he plans to stay as a rival, he needs a serious upgrade. Maybe giving him an early version of the Rozen Zulu?

I caught that Huckbein reference. Very fitting. Your story was amazing, the U.C. Century references were well written.

Finally ! Another fantastic chapter, totally worth my waiting time !

When is chapter 5 coming out ? I've waited too long, please don't drop this story !