I live this story so much. made me ven m ok re hot for Olivia if that's possible. I absolutely love all the stories I have read of yours!

Good stuff. the only thing you might want to work on is the dialogue is extremely stiff, people don't really talk like that lol, no matter how educated. It kinda kills the mood when it feels like two terminators are talkin to each other lol. Your greater writer though, thx so much for writing it

GOD DAMMIT. I KNEW SHE WAS GOING TO BE SERIOUSLY ILL.

Awesome story. Well done:)

Good chapter. And I am getting better, see...

Love the story and the chapter.
Sorry for just reviewing now but once I get drawn into a story I just want to jump from chapter to chapter. I will try and do a better job of it:)

This was an awesome story. I

Thank You for an awesome story! Really enjoyed Liv, Kate and the gang. More on them please.

Terrific chapter! Liv having a baby is great.

Excellent chapter! Great wedding, AND doctors report.

Another great chapter. Thank You.

This was a very enjoyable chapter. Glad Kate's such a tough cookie.

Terrific chapter! Poor Kate...like she really needed more pain. Glad she nailed Dugan. Lawler is a piece of work. He'll be one sorry guy if Abbie prosecutes him.

Thank You for an awesome chapter. WOW...talk about time consuming jobs...

Kate and her Dad were sure lucky in Vegas...shout out for them. I really like how well Kate and Liv's relationship is going.