Bro we need moar ;3

The happiest faces are the saddest souls and the saddest faces are the ones who help them.

awwww poor vanya!

I like your story but you're rushing it. If you wait a bit the drama will be much better. Ivan over reacted when Alfred asked about the blood, It was a cringe moment. He could of said, never mind it's nothing. More drama, less cringe. It also makes the build up for when Alfred and Ivan have a sit down and talk, more drama and makes your readers cry. Slowly letting it out isn't working.

Yay twin bros prucan and fruk!

awww. arthur you dick, you made ivan cry! please post the next chapter soon ;A;

Ohhh, looking forwarx to more! This is so cool! But... what grade is everyone in?

I truly adore your story so far and I hope you will update soon. High school rusame always catches my eye, probably because it’s connected with the reality. I’m happy that you didn't make Alfred as a sarcastic uncaring bitch, who’s only interested in himself. I prefer him this way: laud, obnoxious but still caring ( after all he’s a hero ). Of course it doesn’t mean I dislike his dark side :D. Sooo, wish u good luck with your story and waiting for the next chapter. Greetings from Poland ( that’s why my eng is horrible, sorry for that ’ )

Ahhhhhhh! I love it! Please continue?

This is amazing! The love thing isn't working high. This is only chapter 2 make the whole admiring lips thing more subtle...
However I feel like this is the story I could never write! Iv always wanted to make a high school story about Ivan but it always goes horribly cause I'm impatient.
I'm really liking this and I hope you can update soon!

I really like it and I was honestly anxious for this. Thank you for continuing it.

I really like how neatly you type. XD, sometimes even after I've edited my work, there are still a lot of errors.

Criticism...not much actually. Maybe...make the dialogs as a stand-alone paragraph instead of putting it in a paragraph. Also, I think you should give a little more detail in the surroundings. Just a tad bit...or the people around them like how they look and stuff. XD, I really like some detail. But honestly, it doesn't really matter.

Love how this is turning out. I really hope that Ivan goes deeper into emotional turmoil! XD, I like it that he's confused and stuff.

Oh wow, so that is their beginning.

Me like! I will follow! Interesting. I hope you update soon but remember to always take time! XD