It’s great but I’ll wanna kill u
Keep being awesome
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I love it.I love the part where chaos the all powerful god get beat by Zoe and Percy just dips out and leave his father to get beaten by up that amazing work

This better not be a three way...

You are king

Please upload soon! I am dying to see what happens. :) ~likethebossiam

...you hate her too? I thought I was the only one.
I absolutely LOATH Annabeth, and its nice to finally meet someone else who doesn't idolize her.

Awwwww, don't worry we understand :)
I wish you luck in your schoolwork (just from your words you have shown more effort then me lol)
I do however hope to see a new chappie for this story within. AT LEAST a month plz
If not it's cool :)

Hey all I care about is the fact that you're trying which shows you care about your readers and I approve of that.

Has Nico appeared yet? And if so which chapter?

no problem I understand what it's like. I resently moved to a different state and had a huge party and had some friends over. they got drunk and had to spend the night. they also broke my computer so I've been having to do everything on my phone. so as I said I understand and good luck for school and your life.

update update

This is a great story, I really hope that you continue it, pleasr don't scrap it and start again. From an outside perspective the reason why people don't like/read your 10k Percy and Thalia torture story ( sorry can't remember name), is because there is no summary and even a bad summary is better than just saying it has torture, which people wouldn't really want to read if it was solely about that and nothing else, which is what it seems like. Anyway, sorry for ranting you're a great writer and I hope you carry on :-)

I like it!

Oh this is priceless! I was half expecting Chaos to say 'Judas!' when Percy just left. But it was still funny.