I've found this story recently, and I very much like how you picture SS and HG. They behave the way I would expect them to. Please don't let me wait for much longer. There surly has to be some happy ending after so much heartbreak?

I hope you find time to continue this wonderful story at some point.

I really wish there was an epilogue. I come back and reread this all the time. I also would love some scenes from Severus' point of view. Like when he finds her collapsed on the ground. I miss this fic! By far one of my favorites. If you ever feel like coming back to it I will be waiting!

I really enjoyed that :)
Update soon!
Sassyluv xxx

Thank you for finishing the story. I actually like that you didn't make it longer than needed. The only loose end I can imagine is Ron and the friendship with him and Harry. But I guess that doesn't really matter either... now that she and severus are together and happy, she'll be able to handle pretty much anything :)

I did like that! Good place to end it - not every story needs am epilogue Nineteen Years Later, I can think of one story known to us all (hem, hem, naming no names) that could have done well without one. Although I'll gladly read anything along those lines that you wish to write. ;)

More please

I'm enjoying what you have written so far. Hope you update soon. I want to know what Severus really meant for Hermione to find out from Harry; because he seemed disappointed that their relationship took such a huge step back.

Ron should have just ignored her at the party but he isn't a bastard. Hermione is a much worse human being compared to him.

Severus needs to stop being such a kissass. Hermione is finally starting to admit what she did was horrible and that if she's never freidns with Ron again it is entirely her fault and Snape is just a rotten abstard trying to tell her she isn't

He's just a creepy old dude telling the young girl what he thinks she wants to hear.

Hermione has no grounds to be angry at Harry. Her actions, not the break up but the way it was done and the issues surrounding it, are why harry staid away.

Hermione needs to stop playing the victim and admit the things she's done.

Hermione seems not to understand how callus and cruel what she did was. It wasn't that she broke up with Ron, it was the manner of it and after making it appear for a long time that she was really invested in it. She lied and mislead someone who she supposedly cared about.

Hermione in this fic is actually a pretty horrible human being.

Oh, no, you've left me bereft! I was assuming that with 2 chapters to go in this 18, the star-crossed lovers would finally get around to admitting they loved each other, or at least that they wanted a relationship! I don't care if you leave Ron as a prat for the rest of eternity - an even temper was NEVER a strong suit in the Weasley clan - but you've left Neville thinking Hermione might be interested in dating him, and Snape's real level of interest in a *relationship* with Hermione is still invisible to your readers. Please don't leave us here! Don't just muddle around with the characters - figure out what your *ending* is going to be! - then start aiming toward it! I'll bookmark this story, and check in again someday, in hopes you've written more.

Luna is as always perceptive. Looking forward to next chapter.

enjoying this