Great story shame you stopped it

just as a suggestion since you are making a new story for this, could you post an note or something letting us know of the new story? And perhaps waiting 24 hours before deleting the old one so all the old favoritors and followers can respectfully fave and follow the story.

it was good but the appearance of hinata broke it I like Hinata, but now I'm indifferent to a good day. It was great when he had a goal and ran. Naruto inspired her crazy. He inspired many other people. Her one-sided compassion was comical and charming, but all one-sided. He really does not know Naruto outside of her stellar version. She never faced him, she saw him in the best and worst position, and Hinata's miserable inclination would never satisfy Naruto's desires for jokes and fiery moments. The relationship about him and Sakura in a nutshell is fun and fiery. Hinata would never hit Naruto with a pin when he was too cocky or self-centered, but Sakura would do it. That is the difference. Poor Neji was a sacrificial lamb who bound Naruto x Hinata. Hinata can better save the disgrace of her clan. Hinata's nature may be beneficial for introducing changes to the Hyuy barbarian system. Even if she cared for her, she was weak and selfish. Neji would be great if he lived. I bet the only thing she ever did was marry another Hokage because her clan now has a guaranteed fee for future generations. In any case ... I like to think that Naruto married her because she would love him enough for both of them and for political improvement. Literally ... and Kishimoto seems to hate Sakura ... so he turned her into brainwashing, deprived of his own mind, and now she's an absurdly sad housewife. W / there is no real husband, because Sasuke can not worry ... you know ... because the lives of bandits and Sarada asked questions, which we all died. I still think she is Karen's daughter. Sasuke does not fuck anything that seems to someone who wants to "resurrect" his clan. (Actually, he does not deserve to shit, but his bitch Kishi is so ...) Naruto stays away from his family, because in the depths of his soul is unhappy and tired of pretending

when will you update your other fics?

please continue and complete this fanfic series

Update please and thank you.

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This is great as good as Dragonflex's So not the Dattebayo which I think is better only because of the amount of content it has and have some 'real'-world references like World of Warcraft put in there even KFC. Which really sets the immersion into the story. So more jokes and references would be great to have.

Aww... naruhina in a crossover? Im not opposed to it but theres enough of that in the regular naruto fanfic category, oh well

I don't know how to say this besides coming straight out but this guy u/4681710/ has straight ripped your Kim Possible story as there's. At first you can't tell but once you get half way you'll definetly see the similarities, then he just has the story move on word for word from yours. Happy to have found it and at least notify the real author, best of luck and amazing story thus far. I hope to see more in the future.

Keep it up,
JoshMacontosh.

Given Naruto's part of a secret ninja clan (can't wait for Kim and Ron to find out) I wouldn't object if you decided to give Naruto a double pairing with both Kim and Hinata. Also, why not show Ron some love until Yori shows up? Tara seemed pretty interested in our favorite idiot.

Hi there! I've read the whole chapter and I must say you've written "said" numerous times as well as "asked" to the point where it becomes irritating. Dull. Maybe it's just me who isn't fond of it but it'd be nice to change it sometimes.

For example, instead of (("I know mom." Naruto said. Then looked down because he feels bad...)) why not (("I know mom." Naruto groaned dejectedly. Then looked down because he feels bad...)) see what I did? I altered few words and it made the whole sentence more alive than what the former sentence portrays.

I'm not saying you should avoid using "said" as there are better words in it's place, what I mean is for you to lessen it. Be more creative. Readers know dialogues are said but the question is how? Is the character whispering, crying, exclaiming, cheering, stuttering, or arguing back sarcastically?

Please take no offense. I don't know if you're sensitive to this kind of review or not, so I apologize if I ever hurt you.

Peace.

I look forward to the Naruto X-men Evolution one. Keep updating and posting, I love it.

Huh that pretty good idea to have Naruto get into relationship with someone else before the junior prom.

Also if you are redoing the young justice story. Is it possible to add Sasuke in the story with Naruto? :D

Please update more chapters to this story its been over a year soon to be two so please do more chapters if you can