this is good please continue

Please continue this!

dun dun dun- Merlin may the odds ever be in your favor over these terrible times coming upon you! I can't wait to read more! I really enjoy their reliance on magical people and the simple things they forget (walking off from camp). Will Caledi approach Merlin about her assumptions? I was starting to like her then that prophecy... shows you can never get too comfortable with new characters! Please update soon:)

This was avery goodpassage :) #Sunshine

Ooh, dramatic cliffhanger. Nice.

It was worth it.

Thanks, great chapter. I guess Merlin will be questioned very shortly by a curious Caledi - should be interesting! Look forward to the next chapter.

dude! dude! You should like totally i dunno make another chapter, also happy early valentines day / I really love this fanfiction but perhaps I love the writer a little more ;D lol

sounds fun,the next chapther that is. I hope your brother doesn't want something expensive.

I'm enjoying the story so far! Definitely interested to see where it's going. The POV changes seem to be flowing fairly well, and I'm enjoying the banter :)

Awesome! Yr an amazingly author! I cannot wait for the next chapter!:D

No Need to beg. Enjoying the story. Still not sure as to whether the sorceress is a goody or a badie. Looking forward to the next update.

This is great.

keep up the good work - and don't take shit from your brother. You're writing quite nicely!

Very good.