no honor among the wolves. they're just an overgrown, self important puppies who think they are better than anyone.

so Sam ordered Paul to kill Charlie ? i'd like to see him try.

i like the new Emmett, ready to kick Rosalie's ass if she opens her big ugly mouth!

yes, Edward should die. he's already gone beyond the limit. he's betrayed the family and tried to separate mates. he also didn't follow the head of the coven's directive.

Paul is going to die. is Sam stupid for not training the pack for their true purpose or did none of the elders train him?

I loved the story for the most part, but I'd like to say one thing. you made it that jasper and bella shared gifts. Bella is also a shield that can project it. there is no way Maria would have been able to affect jasper like that. this made me disappointed at the end.
other then that, thanks for the read

Spooks, Twilight Edition...?

We will survive! Woo! Famous last words, Alice?

Another great story. just one thing I don't understand. Why wouldn't Bella use her shield against the Marias attack?

Edward needs to die! Burn his ass!

You have got to be shitting me? Edward is an a-hole! if he wanted Bella so bad why in the hell would he help James?

LOL Smooth moves JW! That scene was so vivid, I could actually see Jasper stumbling into her room. sticky window, stumbling over the box. So much so it had me chuckling, rolling my eyes and smdh.

I’m enjoying this, but I just wanted to provide one bit of constructive feedbackI know you wrote this quite a while ago and o have no idea if you’re still writing (or even on this site...), but anyway... each time you refer to Bella as ‘the brunette’ while you’re in her POV it pulls me out of the story. It becomes omniscient or objective narrator for that moment.
It would work if, say, you were in Rose’s POV, or even Jasper’s right at the start of their relationship (though not later), but not when it’s hers.

That said, I really am enjoying this. I like your premise, and I like your JW.

Hahahahahaha hahahaha omfg and you add yet another aspect to the whole mess! I should stop reading now. There’s just way too much going on. It’s a complete mess.

This story would’ve been far more interesting if the events happened sequentially instead of all at the same time. There’s too much happening all at once. I wish it were more of a story instead of a plot vomit. Perhaps Edward could’ve been dealt with first then introducing the wolves and Peter then James and co. Just like in SM’s books where E/B first have the hurdle of getting to know each other then James then the birthday party then the wolves then Victoria then the Volturi. In this case it’s a fan fic author trying so hard to keep their readers interested by doing too much all at once.