Reviews for Slave of Your Heart
David Fishwick chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
Brilliant idea and thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
Plz turn into a full story, cause I loved it.
Hellzz-on-Earth chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Please tell me you did continue this or plan too and soon? lol
Just to clarify this is Bonnie from the books correct? I was spoiled on the series so didn't read the books, but oddly enough I'm a fan of Bonnie regardless. I'm weird, sorry. ;)
Love that this is a period piece too. I wonder if Damon knows what Bonnie is? Does she even know? I totally imagine Bonnie being from a powerful family somehow?
I couldn't stop laughing at Damon putting the diva Elena in her place!
Thank you for sharing.
hopelessdream2005 chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
This was great! My only complaint is that there won't be another chapter lol but I myself actually enjoy writing one shots more than anything else. I hope that Bonnie will be treated better than with her other owners :) I liked how you made Damon drawn to her because of her innocence and light, I've often felt that was the case in the books, as I feel she was drawn slightly by his darkness. Anyways great story!
MileyRowling chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
This is really good!
Franca-the-Fortress chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Lies! This cannot be a completed fic! I demand more so please give the people what they want. P.S. I will forgive the Italian in Roman times (Italian didn't exist yet lol)
Lula9167 chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
I would love to read more of this one-shot. :)
Aphrodite-Venus-u.k chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
Your English has really improved since I started reading your stories! Hardly any grammar problems at all! I did see two small, tiny ones: Gaius, Julius Caesar doesn't need a comma in it (I think, I could be wrong on that one) and the sentence starting with "600" you should write out six hundred. It just looks strange to have a number in numerical form at the start of a sentence. Enough about that. I really like your plot line her. It's very realistic and well written. You write all of the characters very nicely, plus you set up the historical scene very well. I would be fine with either you leaving it as a one shot or making it multi-chaptered; both are good ideas. Nice work!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
OMG UR SO GOOD! Make a other1! A part 2 but make it rated M!
Danielle Salvatore chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I loved it! Very sexy ;)

I definitely think you should turn this into a fully story. (If you have time that is), because it has a lot of promise. It would be sweet to see Bonnie slowly realizing that Damon won't be like her past masters and won't hurt her, and them falling in love of course 3

But it's amazing as a one shot as well :)
Describethesunlight chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Urghhhhhhhhhh SEX ME UP!
AJDI492 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
omg i love it! Its great its ashame it was just a one shot