Hello, I'm new to this story but I absolutely love it already. You have me hooked and I'm so glad you're continuing it. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Great story. I’d honestly like to see Emma and the other heroes reactions to the girls disappearance.

Yes! I'm sorry to say I even forgot what this story is about, but I know I'm gonna enjoy the rewrite for sure...that said, I remember reading this at 14 and not skipping a single chapter because I actually enjoyed your writing (at that time barely any fanfiction interested me enough because I was such a critic XD). So...keep it up! I'll be around to cheer you on, even if it takes me a few months to do so because of my busy life as well (-)

Yay! This was one of my favourite Pan stories! :)

Hope to read more soon.

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I'm most looking forward to cam and Felix. It can't come fast enough for me. Are there going to be any chapters focusing solely on minor characters?

Please Update ASAP!

This chapter was awesome! I can't wait for Cam and Felix! I also can't believe I started rereading this a couple hours ago and now I'm out of chapters... Oh well, guess I could read through again ;)

Alilyn and Peter are ridiculously cute! I can't wait for Bae and Hook to show up.

Keep up the great work! 3

Okay, can I just say I LOVE the way Peter and Lily became King and Queen? CAUSE I DO! I loved the crown thing from the beginning, and I think it was so creative to have them actually be recognized as royalty by killing the past queen together.

Both the funeral and celebration were beautiful, and so well handled. All Peter/Alilyn moments are phenomenal! They have this great balance between obvious attraction, and not being insta love.

Okay, honestly, I just love this entire story! It's all fabulous, and I can not wait to see where it goes. I'm really interested seeing things like Cam learning to trust men, Felix's respect for his new queen growing, and how the main oncers will eventually tie in. Don't worry though, I really enjoy the pacing and it's so good I don't feel like "oh my god, just get to season three already!" I'm enjoying the road getting there ;)

Keep up the great work! 3

Hylla and Reyna belong to Rick Riordan

I'm going to stop reading this bcos honestly it started off so good then you randomly forgot about the plot of the story and randomly started writing about the past I don't understand how you could do that. You have honestly ruined the story for me I can't describe how disappointed I am. I am sorry if I came across as rude but I was just expressing my opinion Xxx

So glad that 'segment' is over bcos it was so pointless god

What is happening with this story? Or should I say these stories?

Could you have not put these bits at the start of the story ? It's confusing

Seriously what is this?