HOT!

awe nice story

This is literally my new favorite fanfiction ever. I know it's complete, but still. I think it's amazing.

To be honest, I almost thought something like this was going to happen in the train car before John realized the bomb was turned off :'D And wouldn't that have been a beauty. But this is even better, thank you for making my night!

Oh god, that was brilliant. Beautiful character engagement. Though I understand that the BBC would not have our boys making hot passionate love on the tram, I wish that they had given room for the character development to go a little further than it did (not to say the actors didn't invest in that development because they arguably did, but rather that the writing and directing crew did not invest in it as much as was possible). You have done that. Thank you. Just wonderful. :)