This story is awesome! I hope you do write more, especially what become of Elsa and Gerhard! We all would like Elsa to find love too :) and then she would be connecting the families of Corona and Arendelle, even if it's through cousins! And Gerhard, since he's trained to be a king, could definitely be a helping hand to Elsa, and a great companion! Please write more? Pretty please?!

Starlin's Ghost

please write a fanfic about Elsa and Gerhard.

Wow, the real Flynn was such a wimp. Good chapter, update soon please.

A Wonderful ending for a suberb story!
Do not overwork your self!
Well done!

Not the best, departure from the norm doesn't bother me, it's your writing, seems flat and almost as if you were hard-pressed for ideas/ to write… If this is true, take it easy… And hope everything turns out okay for future chapters… cheers

Very nice XD love the new character and I cannot wait to read more.

Haha. This was pretty funny.

Rapunzel and Eugene seem a bit out-of-character to me, but for the most part, I enjoyed this chapter. I like that Elsa and Rapunzel can relate a bit, and it'd be adorable to see their friendship blossom.

Yes! Finally someone pragmatic enough with a good perspective of the future. I like Gerhards job interview for beeing a king. Those two could get along!
(just how often have you seen that movies... I mean Vladimir... always surprised!)

Hahaha. I guessed that he had figured it out! Loved this chapter. Gerhard seems interesting! I feel like they could definitely be compatible while at the same time I'm with Elsa. Time would tell. Anyway he definitely good friend material and quite the funny guy. Also awkward conversation is awkward. OMGsh I'm way too excited for the bonus chapter!

So are there two girls, one named Eve and one named Eva?

Lovin this story! The way they interact feels so natural, although Rapunzel seems a tad. .. uptight.

Another thing. I kind of see where you are going with the whole life magic thing in chapter 7 and how the tear was the magic baby making power or something. :P (English. I speak it so well.)

Anyway, just proposing something that might help you with thinking of new stories. Have you considered the fact that the sun magic might kill any babies Rapunzel tries to bear? Like, it treats them as a anomaly, like a pimple or a virus, and kills it. Just a random idea.

Well now, I'm sure Gerhard's father will be terrified at how he acted towards at a foreign visitor, a queen no less. If they find out about Gerhard's brother, than Gerhard will be pleasantly surprised, but their father might toss a fit or two.

I'm glad you're giving a normal person for Elsa, and you're right, pairing her up with anyone who has powers would de-mystify her. A scoundrel for royalty...would that because of Tangled, Aladdin, or even Star Wars? Whatever your reason, I think it's a great idea.

Good chapter, update soon please. :)

This story was great, and I hope the mentioned last chapter is here soon!