Reviews for The Immortal
Loki921 chapter 2 . 11/21/2017
I love this. Please update.
dloold87 chapter 2 . 11/21/2017
this is a good start to the story, I hope you update sometime. There are far too few Naruto/Bleach stories that are good, this looks to be shaping up to be one, plus you are a good writer and I enjoy reading what you write.
chicwowwow chapter 2 . 6/7/2017
Moar! I need this in my life pls!
FatherofApokalypse chapter 2 . 4/8/2017
I see you have completely change Black Zzetsu and The White Zetsus history it's alright but you should really add Kayuga eventually. Otherwise amazing story!
Rel-fan chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
i would like to see more to this story.
ijonk chapter 2 . 6/29/2016
Cant say much cz its just like a intro

Just dont make Naruto be himself while younger. That would be distasteful

But i kind a doubt this story will continue
Ilaise chapter 2 . 6/18/2016
Awww... you stopped here? how cruel of you (T.T)

Your first two chapter are a promising beginning... do you intend to continue?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
Aw dissapointing you changed his personality too much.. I'm gonna go now it's a bit too bland even after reading past that personality change the change wasn't for the best..
Drifter950 chapter 2 . 4/3/2016
Right now, you have a story plot laid out with very interesting possibilities.

I look forward to seeing where you go from here.

May the MUSE always be with you!
~.
Naruto Namikaze Ostuki chapter 2 . 3/4/2016
kool ya bastard me want more chapters cant leave me hanging can ya
YuNiMoS chapter 2 . 11/23/2015
Please update this soon. The story has a lot of potential!
godlikenaruto95 chapter 2 . 11/15/2015
This is what I don't like about Naruto fanfics, everyone relies on chakra to enhance there strength. No one uses actual physical strength. The same can be said for speed. It's starting to get very boring and annoying
void242 chapter 2 . 9/3/2015
Please update!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/26/2015
Wtf man, update this. This is the first time that I have ever posted on this site and I've been using it for 2 years now so please update, this is a good story
MajinTree chapter 2 . 8/13/2015
Please update soon. I like the start of this.
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