| Reviews for Too Close For Comfort |
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Guest chapter 8 . 3/31 S |
spnfan2005 chapter 9 . 4/3/2018 love it please write more |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/7/2016 Great story & awesome ideas! I really hope you update soon! Awesome job! :-) |
Guest chapter 9 . 1/26/2016 Please update please |
Child of Dreams chapter 3 . 8/7/2014 Did Harry survive a second Killing Curse? |
Chloe chapter 9 . 2/2/2014 Good story and concept. But a few technical and grammar errors. Watch your spelling as it's "Grimmauld" not "Grimwald", "Weasley" not "Weasly" and also "Quidditch" not "Quidich" etc etc. Maybe trying getting a beta or have someone read over your writing. Very good so far but with a bit more focus on grammar and also structure then you'd be flying. Best of luck writing. |
Pepper-up Pomfrey chapter 1 . 1/30/2014 good one! |
Lupinesence chapter 8 . 1/14/2014 Good chapter |
Guest chapter 8 . 1/11/2014 Liked it! 3 |
frankilyc chapter 7 . 1/6/2014 OMG! WHAT THE HECK HAS GOT HARRY? PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
frankilyc chapter 5 . 1/6/2014 I'm a little scared of this chapter... but it's really good! |
frankilyc chapter 4 . 1/6/2014 Polyjuice Potion! That is SUCH a good idea! Wow, your good! |
frankilyc chapter 2 . 1/6/2014 OMG! IS HARRY DEAD!? |
frankilyc chapter 1 . 1/6/2014 This is a great chapter! Lots of drama in it! LOVE IT! |
Lupinesence chapter 7 . 1/6/2014 Cool chapter, bit of an evil cliffie ;) |